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Taken (Part IV)
Published Nov 2, 2011


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Well, we know that Chris Parker seems to be getting himself deeper and deeper into trouble.
A burglar gave him a message from the God Father.
The cops took his data.
What is Chris going to do? What will happen?

Welcome to the 4th Part of Taken, enjoy ;-)

Well, we know that Chris Parker seems to be getting himself deeper and deeper into trouble.
A burglar gave him a message from the God Father.
The cops took his data.
What is Chris going to do? What will happen?

Welcome to the 4th Part of Taken, enjoy ;-)
Instead of working on his desktop,
Chris decided to take some time off and tried at a new hobby; making drinks.
And it was fun! He wondered why he didn’t try this before...
Of course, his desktop crashed and being out of commission may have something to do with the extra free time...
But that was not the point; he doesn’t need an alibi to give himself space.

The point is that Chris now has more time to think through and weigh his options.
Looking at the choices available, he has 3 paths.

He could take a gamble and work in the police force, hopefully snitch on some information.
Considering how well they erased Joanne’s records and kept the information well-hidden,
it is unlikely he would get anything out of them.

Or, he could work with the God Father... in which this help won’t come cheap.
Making deals in the black market always involve great risks;
Usually, the price that comes with the deal far outweighs the benefits.

Lastly, he could continue the current situation to search for Joanne by himself...
But look where this choice has gotten him?
Setting aside the mixer, Chris sighed.

The answer is obvious, he is desperate.
He can’t do the search alone and that was why he sent letters for help.
Meantime, a man walks along the streets, humming to himself...

“As he came into the window...  It was the sound of a crescendo.  He came into her apartment... He left the bloodstains on the carpet...”

He knows that he will be seeing Chris today; he always wanted to meet with this person since a year ago.
He also knows that Chris will do anything to get Joanne back.

The man grinned, today feels like a good day.
Meantime, 2 ladies left the airport...

“Fred!! I can’t believe that we are finally here! We are in VICE CITY!!!” Barb exclaimed excitedly.

“Yeah... We needed a vacation.” Fred sighed.
“We can head for the beach, eat at a fabulous restaurant, do some sight-seeing...” Barb started going off with plans for their trip.

Fred smiled. “We could do all that...
But since we are here for a break, let’s take it easy...”
“Oh, Fred... I’m just SO excited to be here...
What would you like to do?”

“Well, I could really do with a drink actually.
What say you, Barb?”

Barb gestured at a cab and answered,
“That’s a great idea! Let’s go.”
Finding a bar in town, the Brenny sisters started planning their itinerary for the vacation until they felt their stomach growling.

Pointing her fingers together, Fred suggested.
“You know, we really should get something to eat while we are at it.”
And Barb went ahead with the order,
choosing a beer for Fred and a cocktail for herself.
And cookies.

“Cookies? I understand if they go with tea, but...”

Barb just grinned, “Beggars can’t be choosers!”
Fred laughed and took a sip of her drink, then she turned to Barb and whispered.
“Don’t look now... But I think we are about to have company...”

“Hello ladies, you don’t look like you are from around here.
Mind if I join you?” The man approached their table.
“Err, sure. Take a seat.” Fred gestured.

“Sis! Are you sure...?” Barb asked a little worriedly.

“It is fine, we could ask him about the sights and sounds of Vice City...”

“From the sound of it, you two ladies are tourists?” The man clasps his hands together and looks at them expectedly.
“Well, ask no further! I will tell you as much as you want to know.”

“That’s really nice of you... Sir.” Barb replied.

“PLEASE!” Holding up his hands, “Call me David.”
Within an hour, David started describing the hotspots in town; what they should see and where they should avoid...

“What do mean about ‘places to avoid’?” The sisters asked simultaneously.

“I mean, my dear ladies, that there are bad places that should not be visited by nice folks like you.”
“I have enough of this...” Fred waved her hands dismissively at his comment.
“What are you trying to tell us... That there are ‘bad’ forces at work here?
What about the police?”

David kept quiet.

Barb looks at Fred, this time she was curious.
“David, do you mean that there are other forces on this island besides the police? Something like gangs and mobsters?” Barb asked.

David replied, “It is best that ordinary folk like you ladies do not get involved...”
Quickly finishing their food and drinks, Fred got up.
“Let’s go, Barb. I’m starting to dislike the company we are having...”

Barb spared another glance at this stranger and left.

David sits at the table alone, thinking what interesting people the Brenny sisters are.
But they are not his main focus right now, for he hears the sounds of footsteps coming closer.
Even without looking, he knew who was behind him.

"Are you the God Father?"

“Chris, so glad of you to join me.
Let’s talk business...”
And that’s a wrap for this chapter!

I’m sure some of you will know who the Brenny sisters are ;-)
Thank you LOADS to spitzmagic and Fred for their self-sims and to the cc creators for their work.
As for screen 6, the song that David sung was not other than Smooth Criminal by Michael Jackson. Really love that song :D

And to you dear readers, kudos for following the series till this far :D

Stay chill.
-Frank
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#9xhaiiNov 3, 2011

Congrats to this feature Frank! You deserved it \:D. The brenny sisters appearance was cute \:wub\: The Godfather looks very cool and I think his appearance fits his title as well. Still waiting to hear from Joanne! \:rah\:

#10martoeleNov 3, 2011

A nice 'in between' chapter with as the big surprise the Brenny sisters as 'gueststars'. It was a nice break! \:D  congratulations on the feature! \:cool\:

#11AyuNov 3, 2011

heeee, nice touch with the special guest star~!!i have to admit, you got me there for a second \:D oh oh, okay..the godfather is scary!! huuuu, he better be good to Chris (good? can a godfather be good? xD) btw, congrats for the feature dear!

#12Nemesis_3050Nov 3, 2011

oh Frank ohhhhhhhhhhhhh Frank ..... I want mooooooore moooooooooore (eheh)

#13HottiesheldonVIPNov 4, 2011

great chapter once again, always keeps you wanting more an more....can't wait for the nxt part. 5.0 for sure \:\)

#14fruitopiaVIPNov 5, 2011

The Brenny sisters LOL, the godfather interesting and sort of a scarry fellow.  Good chapter, can't wait for more.

#15eviNov 6, 2011

Great chapter again!\:rah\:

#16urm0mNov 21, 2011

Good installment \:D well done xxx

#17anura32Dec 15, 2011

Awesome... Cant wait to know what the God father will ask in return.. And will he find Joanne

#18bukovkaJan 16, 2012

Very nice, thank you\:wub\:

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