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Untouched part 1
Published Dec 23, 2011


Written By

kirstysmall1

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This is my first story,enjoy!:)

This is my first story,enjoy!:) ''Well this is it,girls''My mum says in a jolly voice.
''Erugh,why do we have to keep moving,once i get settled we have to move again!''i snap back.
''Well,thats the way it is Keri,i can't help it!''
My sister Anna buts in ''Well it looks nice...''
There is a awkward silence.
''Im going to unpack my stuff''
''Ok,hun''
Why do we have to keep moving for? I always have to make new friends its so annoying.
I wish my Dad was with us now,
''KERI!''My mum shouts.
''WHAT?!''
''Why don't you go and meet our nextdoor neighbors?''
''ERUGH,fine might aswell make some friends before school starts''
''Hey im Keri your nextdoor neighbor?''
''OH,hey im Hannie nice to meet you! do you want to come in and meet my brother? By the way he is abit moody''She giggles.
''Oi,Sean this is Keri our nextdoor neighbor!''
''Uhm,hey im Sean''
''Keri'' i say with a smile
''Want a drink or anything Keri?'' Hannie asks me
''Uhm,no thanks''
His eyes are so blue?and his skin is so pale i think to myself.
There is a awkward silence,
I think this is a good time to make a exit ''Well nice meeting you,i better get going!''
''Ok,I'll see you at school?''
''Ok,bye''
Sean don't even say bye,Hannie is right he is moody!
''Well this is it Anna,i'll cya later!''
''Erugh,i hate starting new schools i have to make new friends all the time!''Says Anna.
''Tell me about it,cya''
''Bye''
''Hello class''
Everyone keeps on talking
''CLASS HELLO,ARE DEATH ASWELL AS STUPID,GOD DAMN IT''
Everyone starts to laugh
''Sorry im late sir,i got lost im new here''
''Ohhh,a new girl!!!!'' someone shouts.
''Oh great another rat'' The teacher says quietly
Everyone is staring at me,like i have killed someone.
''Well introduce yourself!''
''Uh,hey my names Keri''
''Take a seat,then!''
I take a seat next,to Sean.
In the corner of my eye i can see him starring at me its rather awkward...
This lesson is going so slow,I look at Sean in,the corner of my eye,and he is still starring at me,what the hell is wrong with him? has he got a problem with me?
''Can i help you''I say
''Nope''He reply's
The bell goes, thank god i can go home!
''Hey hun,how was your first say of school?
''Great''i say sarcastically
''Im gonna,go bed''
''Before dinner,aren't you hungry?
''No''
''Ok,hun goodnight''.
I wake up,it must be like 2am, well unless it is a Saturday don't have to go back to school in till Monday!
Thankgod
I hear thunder,oh great a storm! I just love the rain i think to myself
Erugh,i hate the rain so much! It makes me feel miserable and moody.
I stare out the window into the sky,and close my eyes I miss you dad.
I open my eyes and see two eyes starring at me
''WHAT THE HELL'' i shout hoping my mum and sister didn't hear.
Is that...Is that Sean?

End of part 1 hope you liked it!:)

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#1CatiarpDec 24, 2011

Ooooooh... this is getting interesting! I wanna know what's going to happen next, so keep on the nice job! (:

#2simmadmaz VIPDec 24, 2011

pizgave me it

#3urm0mDec 24, 2011

Aww cute!

#4Pegasus960Jan 22, 2012

it gets interesting \:wub\:

#5DanceAngel11Feb 4, 2013

super funny

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