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When To Give Up
Published Jun 18, 2012


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Macduff77

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Hello everyone! This story is based on true events of my life.

Names, places and some looks are altered. Objects, of course, altered to fit the Sims environment.

I do use custom content, but mainly on hair and eyes. I try to stick with the original as much as I can.

Now the first chapter may be slow at first, but it will progress on. Yes, this is another teenage drama, but they do grow up. :)

Hello everyone! This story is based on true events of my life.

Names, places and some looks are altered. Objects, of course, altered to fit the Sims environment.

I do use custom content, but mainly on hair and eyes. I try to stick with the original as much as I can.

Now the first chapter may be slow at first, but it will progress on. Yes, this is another teenage drama, but they do grow up. :)
This is Nataly. She is the main character in my story so you will be seeing her around alot. Get use to the face :)

Her bio: Nataly, 18 year old girl, starting up her Senior year of High School.
Ammy and Nataly. Best friends since 2nd grade. Ammy is also a Senior. Kaine...

-sigh-

The love of Nataly's life. The most popular guy at the school. Why? Cus mainly alot of the guys at the high school are blonde jocks who are just rude and takes advantage of every girl. But Kaine, loved by sooo many girls, hated by alot of the guys. Same with Nataly, all the girls hate her, but all the guys think shes a winning prize. Kaine is laid-back, down-to-earth kind of guy. Here's where the story starts.
" Nataly, it's been a long time since we've been together. I'm really happy about this. I know it's only our first week of our senior year but I can tell it's gonna be a good one. I mean, heck, we've been dating since Freshman year! " Kaine enthused.

" Haha, yeah, that is true. I can't wait for the year to be over so we can start a life and family all our own," Nataly said.

Kaine had promised Nataly that if they stay together for the whole High School years, they would get married and have children. IF.
" To our future! " Kaine proclaimed.

" To us! " Nataly said, cheerfully.
Nataly knew that the odds of high school sweethearts aren't that good, so she never believed in it until it would happen. Yet, she still made certain with Kaine everyday. Just to make sure. If Kaine was suppose to marry her and have a family with her, he'd have to clean up his act. Nataly NEVER went to Kaine's house. His family and even him were slobs. He never cleaned but always smelled good. Thats because he knew Nataly would get on him if he stunk around her. Big turn off. Kaine was also a huge video game nerd that it was really hard to get his attention when Nataly came over. No going out, no alone time, just video games. Nataly knew he was guy, and this was a guy thing. He just wanted to spend time with Nataly his own way. But Nataly never took him out shopping or anything like that. " Why don't you ever want to do things with me? " Kaine argued.

" Kaine, I've told you. I don't care about video games. Why push me to do something I don't like to make you happy? " Nataly asked.

" Because you love me? " Kaine guessed. " You're suppose to love me no matter who I am! "

Nataly thought Kaine was throwing an uneccesary fit but she caved in to him.
" Fine, bring it to MY house though... " Nataly growled.
Nataly hated that she had to make herself miserable in order to make him happy.
Noticing that Nataly wasn't even trying on the video games, that really angered Kaine.
" Nataly! COME ON! You're not even trying!! " Kaine yelled at her.
" Do NOT yell at me! I'm doing this for you! " Nataly yelled back.
" I bend over backwards, buying you things, taking you places, to make you happy. Least you can do for me is play a freaking video game with me! " Kaine yelled.

" But I didn't want any of those things! Yes, thank you for them and the thoughts but all I wanted was just to hang out with you. No money needed! " Nataly said.
" Fine, I will stop caring then," Kaine concluded.

" That's not what I meant but fine... " Nataly said. It hurt Nataly to be upset with Kaine. She really loved him. But she found out the true extension.

" Maybe we should take a break..." Kaine mumbled, but clear enough for Nataly's hear to pick up and her heart to drop....

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#1xMirandaJun 19, 2012

Woww Nataly is gorgeus ! \:\). Can you put her up as a download( Ammy to maybe)? \:D. Great story btw \:\). xoxoxo

#2Macduff77Jun 19, 2012

I sure can! I'm the middle of part 2 right now, so once I get done with that one, I can put them up and will message you once I do so. \:\) Thank you!

#3xMirandaJun 20, 2012

Okay thanks hun! Can't wait for part 2 \:\). And where did you get the hair? \:D xoxo

#4Macduff77Jun 20, 2012

It will be a while for part 2 since it looks like the TSR's stories section is quite slow so I'm adding all the other parts together in one big part 2. \:\)

All hairs I got from here or xmsims \:\)

#5xMirandaJun 21, 2012

Okay thank you ! \:\). xoxo \:wub\:

#6RenzikittenJun 21, 2012

I loved the story! Kaine kind of looks like Fricorith Tricou from The House of Fallen Trees in Downtown. I feel bad for Nataly. She should've just hung out with Ammy instead of with Kaine though. He is forcing her to make him happy when they should both equally make each other happy. Is there more to the story though? I liked it too! \:rah\:

#7-kalisa-Jun 22, 2012

Well done! Nataly looks really pretty!

#8Macduff77Jun 24, 2012

Renzikitten- I LOVE the Tricou family. I had plans to resurrect them and have them living again, make a story and have them die they way they had died already. But I gave up on that idea. I don't see the resemblance of Kaine and Fricorith though \:\( And yes, I should've, but I was too stupid back then. The things we do to make our lovers happy :/ Yes, there will be a part 2. It's in the making right now.

Kalisa- Thank you!

#9shannon.mariexxAug 6, 2012

its really good so far cant wait to read the others!!xoxox

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