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After Life Ch 3.1
Published Apr 15, 2013


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demonangel26

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Dead like state... How I wished it happened to me.

Dead like state... How I wished it happened to me. When I woke up, I didn't know where I was.

"So, you're finally up." A mans voice greeted me. "Now then, tell me... How exactly did you get here?"
To be honest, I had no idea..

"Here..." I tell him, his expression growing anxious at the same time impatient. "Where is here exactly?"
"Username Adamnation, we must leave the center immediately.." An NPC told me.

But remembering things clearly, i thought they said something about a missing person, it couldn't be.

"My CHILD! Someone get her out of here!" I yelled.
"We will take care of Subject 79920199XX , right now your safety is our number one priority." Another NPC spoke. "We're tracking the culprit captain, but our database has been infiltrated!" Another one spoke.

I had no idea what was going on. But my only concern was my family. "I'm not leaving this place without my wife and child!" I tell them..

And then...
Darkness... Followed by a loud explosion.

I wasn't able to say anything because of the shock.
Or maybe... it was because of the program... something that prevented any sort of distress for any player of After Life.

"Ally..."
I started digging. "Help me, we can get her out of here.

"Username Adamnation, we must leave this place before it collapses."
I just kept digging, I didnt care what happened to me, this woman... she.. Ally... was my life, the only reason why I cease to exist, the reason why I was born into this world, the reason why I went in this game, she was my purpose, my life... and yet... I was powerless over this virtual world, i couldn't even shed a tear for my wife... The NPC kept on saying things, but my mind went blank...

I remember seeing a save point being opened infront of me.
And before I knew it... I woke up where I was. "So you're saying you don't know how you got here?" the man asked.

"Yes! I don't know how, but I need to get home, can you help me get back to Starlight Shores?"
The man turned to the girl in the room. "Are you sure he was alone?"

"Yes, Zane and I found him unconscious near the Sea Shack."

The man was obviously skeptical, it seemed like they were hiding something.
She sat next to the man. "We have no choice Luke... He's one of us now." her voice was low... but what she meant, I still didn't know back then. "That's impossible Zoe." The guy named Luke replied. "I don't believe him, I think he is a spy." he argued.

"But he's here, isn't he? How can you explain that?" Zoe retorted a bit frustrated at this point. "Look, I'm not saying we should trust him, I'm saying we should give him a chance."

They argued like lovers, back and forth, nothing like me and Ally, it felt weird, it was almost as if they were... no.
Many thanks to all the featured CC. Thanks to all those who follow the series as well. Any comments, questions or pretty much any feedback is much appreciated!

Thanks for reading!!

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#1bmg128Apr 15, 2013

Yayyyyy! First commenter!!! I love it. Keep going! You have talent!!! \:\)

#2CherryBerrySimApr 16, 2013

5/5 ! \:\) Keep up that great work! \:wub\:

#3andantezenJul 10, 2013

I'm a great fan of your stories, thanks for sharing them with us!

The screenshots -- angles, colors, layers -- are incredible!

And it has inspired me to try writing my own \:\)

cheers!

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