After Life Ch 3.2
Published Apr 16, 2013

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"I don't mean to be rude... or anything... but I don't plan on... sticking around." I told the two.

"I don't mean to be rude... or anything... but I don't plan on... sticking around." I told the two. "Not now Baldie." The girl named Zoe said fuming.

"Now look what you've done." Luke retorts.
"WHAT I'VE DONE?!" Zoe laughs it off before going completely silent. "Fine... I'll allow him to stay, but I'm only saying this once Zoe. He is NOT one of us."

Luke says before silently standing from his seat leaving the room.
-Earlier the same day-

"Yes, I under stand.... I'll make sure of it..." An NPC says before logging of the computer.

It then stood up, taking one step to the side before pushing the seat back in place.
It headed straight out the room only to find out that It was already alone.

It removed it's head gear and throws it afar.
It dialed the numbers 154207711 and presses the icon call.

It waited patiently for the call to connect, and once it did, it spoke.

"We may have a bit of a problem." It says slowing down in between sentences. "It appears he has been taken by them."

It said nothing more... Then seconds later the call ended.
"W33ll w9t 2 U knoM" it says before completely breaking of... "Are you listening?" Luke says.

I can hear him speak, see his form, but someway somehow, it felt like I wasn't there to begin with.

"Hey Baldie!" Zoe spoke this time. "What's the matter?"

It was strange how I didnt know how I got here to begin with, why I was here, what I was doing here, whom this people were...

And then...
Just like that.

"What's wrong with you?" Luke snaps angrily.

I was back.

"Yeah, I got it." I replied.
"Easy as pie Baldie." Zoe laughs, giving me a small wink before heading first. "Careful now." Luke tells her, grabing hold of her... arm?

"Yeah! I got this!" She laughs before taking a plunge.
These were really strange people, how come they lived here anyway?

"It's your turn Baldie, take a dip, careful not to drown." Luke said, sounding more like mockery than anything.
"And oh, by the way. If you so much as touch a hair on my sisters head, you'll regret it." Luke warned.

It seemed Zoe and him were siblings.
I took a plunge and ventured under the well which lead to no where until I found an escape. I almost ran out of air and could have seriously drowned.

"Took you long enough! Man, I thought you were gone there, your'e lucky you made it through by your self the first time!" Zoe commented.
I pulled my self up greeted by a few unsociable people.

"These two are my friends, Sam and Zane, Zane and I found you by the way... you better thank her when you have the time." Zoe says, she really is talkative sometimes.

"Hey, I'm France." I greeted the guy, Sam. But sadly, got nothing in return, it was better to talk to a wall.
"Now then, are you ready?" Zoe asks.
"Here goes nothing." I reply.
"Nothing official yet, but welcome to Genesis. This is our headquarters, EDEN." Zoe says before the elevator rings.
Thanks again for the comments and continues support, I wish I could than all the featured CC one by one also, but I've seriously lost track, anywho, one featured CC is this awesome sci-fi-ish car, but I forgot who made it, but thanks again!! XD



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#1HumorMehApr 17, 2013

Wowzaa! I love your pictures, and this plot of yours just keeps on thickening, doesn't it?

#2AlessaFayeApr 17, 2013

I LOVE this story and the pictures are as equally amazing! \:rah\:

#3JennC32Apr 17, 2013

This is a great story...has a "Matrix" feel to it...Keep up the great work! I am loving this and your screen shots are amazing!

#4eviApr 17, 2013

Very good!\:rah\:

#5florie1977Apr 17, 2013

Awesome story! \:rah\:

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