After Life Ch4
Published Apr 19, 2013

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It was a long way down to Eden...

It was a long way down to Eden... That it got me thinking...

"Have we met before?" I asked Zoe.
She was taken aback a bit but was able to cover it up with a reply. "Why do you think so?" she asked.

"It's just that... I think I've seen you somewhere before... But maybe not, i guess.."

---POV ZOE---

It was not a secret I wanted to keep...
But I couldn't just tell anyone. After all, we, Genesis, is all we have left...


"Hey, Zoe! Come give me a kiss!" A guys voice spoke, seemingly coming from the one holding the camera.

"What's wrong with this thing?" He hits the video camera a few times completely ruining the picture before it returns to normal.

"There it's perfect!" The guy says. "Now how about that kiss?" The guys continues chuckling in the background.

"Stop it Z!" Zoe laughs. "Silly!"

"You should really stop Z, or else you'll get it!" another male voice says.
The picture moves and before everyone's eyes the Dark Prince sat in vivid color.

"Enough with the camera! You'll destroy that thing!" He ordered.

"I'm making a documentary Luke! It's necessary." Z laughs.
It was only natural, after all, we were a popular band named Genesis. We were on our way to the top, and there were posters of us everywhere, shows on the television, live shows and many many more. We were living the life to fame, together with my two other friends, Sam and Zane. 'I dunno why I'm falling...
I must seriously be out of my mind.'

Zane was our vocalist and she sang her way to the very top of the elites.

And my brother, AKA Demon King rose to fame because of both his looks and God-like guitar skills.
We were a band... And the two of them (Zane and Luke) were at the top of the very top.

'And I.. Don't know why I'm now crying... I must seriously be, out of my mind... my mind...'
This thing later presented problems with our manager... which eventually, lead us where we are now...

'my mind... out of my mind... my mind...'
"Ted, Zoe's coming in with a newbie." a girly voice said. "A newbie? Well that's new! HAHAHA." Ted says, laughing at his own joke pathetically.

"Let them in." He continued after laughing a few minutes more.
"Welcome back Zoe, this will only take a minute." Ted says over speakers.

"Got it boss!" I said.

Boss was what we always called Ted, an old habit I suppose.
"Okay, you're all good." Ted says.

"Thanks boss!" I say before heading off to the next room.
"Okay, newbie! First things first! Strip!" Ted says laughing once more. "I'm just kidding, so funny, no. Uhm, just follow Zoey's lead, nothing but underwear boss."

"Got it." France replies.
What happened, happened. There's nothing we could do about it now.

"Not bad baldie." I yell loud enough to be heard.
"So... Hairy.. ppfffttt hahahhahwhahwawhha"

There's nothing we could do now than to move forward.

"Alright, you're all cleared Baldwin." Ted says.

and hope for the best in everything that we do...


Eden looked a lot like an AL-Center, with all the white and blues, the advanced machinery, even the hellish elevator ride, it had AL written all over it.

But why were this people here?

"Really? Is it really that bad?" I asked.

Zoe continuously laughs.

When I walked out of the full body scan, I saw something I've never seen before.

"What is that thing?"
Zoe was slow to reply, she shrugged.

"We dont know... It's been there before we even came here..."

Even so, why did the game have something like this in it's system? It was really strange.

"Sorry to keep you waiting." Ted greeted.
"Believe me when I say this because I really seriously mean this! Welcome man! It's been a while since I've met someone, anyone really. Follow me!"

I used to think Zoe talked alot, but not after I met Ted.

There were so many paths, walls, doors, all metal, my guess would be it's bullet proof as well. It looks to me like EDEN can both protect and harm you if your'e not careful. "Make your self at home." Ted says. "Were not shy here?! Aren't we Zoe?" Ted says.

"Hell NO!" Zoe laugh or replies, or both.
"Oh, and this odd looking fellow is Z." Ted says. "He will be your room mate, he doesn't really talk much but he wont bite you... or anything, but I'm not really sure, HAHA, ohwell." Ted continued.

Later Zoe lead me to my room.

"So.. this would be your room." She says. "I know that everything is so confusing because everything looks the same, so we placed you next to the Cafeteria, and Z is just here if you get lost he will..."

I cut Zoe off by saying. "Thank you Zoe..."
"It's nothing." She says. "And I'm just next door, so if you need anything, dont hesitate to ask! Kay?! Bye!?" She rushed to the end, heading for the door in impossible speed. So this was my room mate.. Z as they call him, quite the odd one... Since he looks so much like a girl...

But it doesn't really concern me. My only concern is my family... And the sooner I get Home... the better...

Ally... Alex... How are you both?
Thanks for the continuous support everyone. And much thanks to all the featured CC.

Is it confusing? If it is ask anything haha, This wasnt planned at all, it just lead from one thing to the next, so if anything didn't connect right, don't hesitate to ask.

Anywho, thanks for reading!



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#1CherryBerrySimApr 20, 2013

OH MY!!! Loved this one soooooo much! \:wub\: \:rah\:

#2Croq-STYLEApr 21, 2013

# Genial ! Sorry i'm french ! #

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