Autumn with You - 5
Published Apr 30, 2013

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can't you see?
i'm here
waiting for you
i know you will come
soon or not you will
you must..
you have to..
for me

can't you see?
i'm here
waiting for you
i know you will come
soon or not you will
you must..
you have to..
for me
i should call rick, he should know what just happen come on donkey ..
answer the phone
kring kring*

oh..! it's len .. i guess he brings a good news!
Helo there fellas!
so what happened? doing great huh?
what do you feel ?
let me guess..
you're over joyed!
Holly crappy Lion !
what you've done???
i just don't believe it..
this is the first time you've been rejected
you're being serious right?
i'm serious you idiot..
anyway i wanna ask you something,
this is about sally
oh merlin no way ..
i feel pity for you
so what's with sally?
you said before that you will go to danny's house, to tell about sally .
so did you really told him ?
yeah! of course .
he just drive me home . maybe now he's gone to ken place, probably go to the club ? . i don't really know but try to check his house, maybe he was there
Damn Donkey . Why ??
why do you so care about sally ?
what is she doing to you ?
you still Sane right..

Rick : or you're being hypnotized ? what's wrong? just leave it, what kind of business is that? you tell me you don't really care about girls didn't you . you said you hate those creatures .. ...
hello ? you still there right? don't tell me you pretend not to listen..
oi lion..
sorry rick , i need to hang up. i don't know what i've just done. Hello???? helllo???!!
he really are insane!
yes , rick is right . i think that girl really hypnotized me. my bodies really move itself but my heart told me .
that i'm really moving because my heart said so, that it is your own will , that girl really special to you and it's mean something to you, know her more , and you will realize something
alright , finally arrived..
Danny's home
the light's are on , hmm..
he's home
Danny! Danny!
(i think he didn't hear me)
i'm coming in!
as usual , he always forgot to lock the door .
danny! are you home?
Danny! Danny!
this guy! really dumb!
Hey crocodile! oi!!!
... you serious ?
i've been calling you from outside , and you don't even answer it even a single word ?
come on danny , you've been doing this for 5 years
Danny : what is it len ? are you searching for rick ? i just drive him home.

Len : no , i wanna talk to you
*danny get up from his couch, and we stare at each other*

Danny : don't look at me like that .. it looks like you'll kill me .

Len : hahaha just give me a break
Danny : so what brings you here len ? i'll make coffee if you want

Len : it's about sally . sure, cappuccino please
Danny : Oh, sally ..
Rick just told me about her an hour ago .

Len : so he did tell you huh?

Danny : yes .. so
Danny : you know Donkey always involved with this kind of stuff. beside that how was the plan ? huge success huh? Len : a total rejected Danny : oh wow , first time being rejected huh ? how does it feels ? broke ?

Len : i don't want to talk about that , but yeah a bit .
Danny : great , now you have a feelings , i thought you don't have any .

Len : moron . i does have feelings
Danny : so what do you really want to talk about ?

Len : it's about Ken
Danny : oh Ken huh , he's now at the club with the girls .. daily life .
he does that everyday ..
i thought you know this already?
Len : I'm not asking where ken is and what is he doing .
i'm talking about you telling this girl to Ken

Danny : ohh , please speak clearly so i can understand
Len : so What did you say about sally to ken ? you don't tell anything stupid right?

Danny : what? i don't meet him today , i don't even call him .

Len : you really intend to tell him?
Danny : if you allowed me.

Len : no .. don't tell him , even it's just her name .

Danny : understood sir

Len : anyway i'll show you something
*len took his phone and showed a beach picture*

Danny : hmm , hey this is the beach we go last year isn't it ?

Len : yes it is , so what did you say ? you know what i'm thinking right ?
Danny : Count me in!

Len : there's no need to count . we does this every year . i just need to decide what date should we go .
Danny : alright! beach camp! don't take too long to decide, i'm gonna make myself warm up!

Len : as soon as possible Dude! anyway i've got to go

Danny : I'll take you up until the patio
Len : so this is it .. thankyou for understanding Dan!

Danny : anytime Lion !

*len get inside into his car , and step back his car into the road*
Len : oi Danny ! don't forget not to tell anything about sally to ken!

Danny : how many times you have to told me?
just once is enough , crazy lion!

Danny : Your face is like lion! hahahaha

*bruumm...then len goes on his way home*
stay tuned for the next chapter!
Thankyou for reading until this far :)

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#1KyaryaApr 30, 2013

dat black hair guy is cool n handsome \:eek\:\:o

#2RoxxaneMay 27, 2013

I love their friendship though \:\)

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