After Life Ch7
Published May 2, 2013

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"Hey Luke... Do you like anyone now?"

"Hey Luke... Do you like anyone now?" "Eh? What do you mean? You like me or something?"

Sam laughs.

"There's a girl I like."

"But someone like her would only hurt me..."

"There's actually a way back?" Ted asks curiously. "You've got to be kidding me..." "Username: Adamnation
ID NUMBER : 154207711
PLAYER STATUS : Missing" Luke reads his research.

"What's the point Luke?" impatiently Ted questions.

"What I'm saying is that this player is Baldie, the one Zoe and Zane found, the one living within EDEN, him. He is our ticket." Luke explained.
"Even if he is STILL considered a player, we have no game portal to send us BACK into the game." Ted shook his head. "We can do as much as hacking into the servers to check for updates and add a few GLITCHES here and there. But that's about all we can do."

Ted sighs taking a short sip of tea before breaking the silence of the room.

"I think it's about time we face reality Luke. We were BANNED from the game and EXILED here. We should just find ways to better survive this place rather than to hack our way back." Ted shook his head still thinking.
"But..." Sam spoke slowly.

Everyone turned to him as it was rare to hear him speak at all.

"What is it Sam?" Luke asks still not losing hope.

Sam turned his head down and shook it a few times.

"There could be a Portal..." He says.

The room fell silent that if a pin had dropped on the floor it would echo.

"A portal? Where?" Zoe inquires.

"There is a facility much like EDEN east from here." Sam explains. "Zane and I were able to break the code and enter, but we haven't explored it yet."

"WAI-WAIT JUST A SECOND HERE! You found a facility like this one and kept it a secret?!" Ted angrily asks then sighs. "What do I do with you guys." He threw his head back releasing another sigh of anguish.

"Well.. I guess that's good news then..." Luke smiles at his friend. "Good Job Sam."
-Later the same day-

"Are you mad at me?" Sam asked "Please don't be..."
He gets no reply...

"I wasn't going to speak... but... if there was a portal then..." Sam tried to explain his actions, but still got no reply.

Zane turns of the faucet before walking away.

Sam watches her walk away with pain induced eyes.

"If we can return... then maybe.... " he whispered for no one to hear.
Ted enters the canteen in high spirits.

"Now then, the exploration team would be Luke, Zoe and Sam, the rest of us would man EDEN." Ted started then turned to Luke. "Luke, I know we are still in the game, but please be careful, protect your team." Ted asked with almost a pleading tone.

"What's the worst thing that could happen to us here anyway? We'll be fine." Luke replies smugly.

"Just be careful." Ted stresses.
It did not take long before they arrived where they were supposed to be.

"I think they called this facility Sodom." Sam says.

"I've never seen this much monitors piled up 3 stories high. It's even more than what we have in EDEN." Zoe marvels in awe.


I was inlove with my best friend...

But it was a one sided love...
"Hey... What is that?" Luke cried. "Is that a person?"

Zoe took a step closer. "HEY, I think he's alive!"

"Hey hot stuff! Wanna go out with me?!" A female voice sang.

And the sad part was that she liked me too... Most times...
We were friends. Best Friends...

But I loved her.

"Here, take my hand." Zane sang. "Don't be shy, you love me don't you?"
"SAM WAIT!" Luke warned cautiously keeping distance.

"Szzaszzzsszs..." The man says.

"HE's trying to say something!!" I helped the man up. "What is it man? Are you okay?"

"SAM!" Zoe yells. "Let go of him I have a really bad feeling about this!"
"Sam... What's wrong?" Zane asks curiously. "Did I do something wrong? Why are you not speaking?"

I never told her anything... She always saw everything as a game.

So I pulled her close and played her game.

"You woman... are the devil." I tell her. "You lure me in just to toss me away, hurt me deep and hunt my dreams." I say.

"Sounds like I'm quite the catch..." She laughs heavily. "What's holding you back.. Wont you kiss me already?" she teases.

"I'm afraid." I tell her.

She laughs before she replies. "Afraid of me?"

"NO." I cleared. "Afraid of you hurting me..."
"OMG OMG! SAM! What's happening? LUKE!!" Zoe cries.

"We need to Leave, Zoe take Sam with you!" Luke yells as he kicked the man angrily.

"bu..But.." Zoe cries some more.

"NOW ZOE! LEAVE NOW!" Luke yells angrily.

This was what was happening... But I was seeing something else.
"Me hurt you?" A female voice sang. "Why don't you try?"

And so I kissed the girl that meant the world to me..
"See?" a girl sang. "That didnt hurt at all now... did it?"

A girl...
"Zane..." I said.

"SAM! can you hear me! Sam! WAKE UP! Please Dont leave like this SAmmmmermmemmmm..."

So this is how it felt like.

I laughed.

"SAM! You're still there aren't you! Speak to me!!"

"Hey Zoe..." I told her weakly..
"Can you tell Zane something for me?"

"Tell her Zoe... Tell her something for me..."

Zoe could only cry at this point...

"Tell her Zoe..."

More tears...

"Tell her..."
"It doesn't hurt at all..." WEE an update! Thanks to all the comments and the featured CC. I know it's kind of weird to start off in a happy note while when the scenario that just occurred tells other wise, but I'm happy that people are still reading this.

Hope you enjoyed this chapter!

Thanks for reading!



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#1kazukazu28May 3, 2013

Hmm.. actually, I don't understand the main of this story. Maybe, because too many characters in this story.
But, I think I should keep reading, so I can understand it.
Over all, this is great story! keep writing!

#2CherryBerrySimMay 3, 2013

Drama,action,drama...Love this! 5/5 \:\) \:rah\:

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#4msmcmanicMay 4, 2013

Thanks for the story, I loved the pictures, especially 21, 23 and 24. Very beautiful.(:

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