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Stolen Waters
Published May 19, 2013


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Paulasoul

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It's been a while since I've written a story. Since my last story got ditched (due to a faulty computer), I decided to try another story. I hope you like it! :-)

It's been a while since I've written a story. Since my last story got ditched (due to a faulty computer), I decided to try another story. I hope you like it! :-) Nicole feels desperate. She has to talk to him now... Nikki: Come on... (Voicemail picks up)

Nikki: Hi, it's me. I really wish you would pick up, you know. This is ridiculous. We can't just stop just like that. Why won't you just talk to me? I need to hear your voice, baby.
Nikki: Please? Nikki: I need to see you. It feels like it's been forever. I need you. Nikki: I love you. He's flying home today. I can't talk long. I feel like I'm being followed. Please call me back. {camera snaps} Jason: It's finally 5:00. This has been the longest day ever!

Sherry: No kidding. I've got one more email to send and I'm out of here.

Jason: Maybe I should ask Agnes if she wants to join us for drinks.
Jason: Hey Agnes, how about we blow this place and head down to the Evergreen for some karaoke. I promise you won't be disappointed. All the hot guys go there. Agnes: I wish I could, but I promised Mr. Randolph that I would finish all of the filing before I leave today. You guys go ahead without me. You'll just have to have all the hot guys to yourself. Jason: Come on! You only live once. Those files will be here in the morning when you get here. I promise. Agnes: Sorry, Jason. I can't. Keep me in mind for next time, okay? Jason: You said that last time. You know, I'm beginning to think that you don't love me at all Agnes Barnes.

Agnes: Oh, stop being so dramatic. You know you're my favorite guy in the whole world.
Jason: Yeah, yeah.


Sherry: Let me guess. She's not going?

Jason: Nope. She's declining.It's just the two of us tonight.
Sherry: Cool! I just need to get my things and I'll be ready.I've been practicing on my Donna Summer tunes. I will reign as the Karaoke Queen tonight! Jason: I'll meet you in the lobby. Sherry: Are you sure you don't wanna hang out with us tonight Agnes? It'll be fun. Agnes: Positive! Have some fun for me tonight. I know Jason will. Sherry: Yes, Lord. He'll be standing on the tables dancing to "It's Raining Men" after his second Spine Reticulator. Sherry: See you in the morning, girlie!

Agnes: Okay. Be safe.
Sherry: Good evening, sir. Harrison: Good evening to you, madame. ... Agnes: I'm sorry sir but we're closed for the day. Do you have an appointment? Harrison: Actually no. I was wondering if you could tell Mr. Randolph that Harrison needs to speak with him concerning an urgent matter. He'll want to see me. Agnes: O-kay. Well let me see if he's available, Mr. Harrison. Agnes: You can have a seat in the waiting area. I'll only be a minute.

Harrison: Thanks so much.
Agnes: I'm sorry to bother you, Mr. Randolph. There's a man in the lobby by the name of Harrison who says he needs to speak with you concerning an urgent matter. Would you like for me to send him in? Adam Randolph is stunned by Agnes' announcement. He quickly gets up from his desk.

Adam: Yes. Send him in.
Agnes: Mr. Harrison, Mr. Randolph can see you now.

Harrison: Thank you ever so kindly madame.
Harrison: Hello, Adam. Adam:(nervously) Harrison. What brings you to this neck of the woods? Harrison: Master Grizwald would like the honor of your presence at his home on Friday for his Christmas party.
Harrison: He wanted me to invite you personally since you hadn't responded to his invitation that he sent you in the mail. Jason: With all due respect Harrison, I don't feel like I should... Harrison: Please sir. It would mean so much to everyone. Harrison: Especially Madame Grizwald. I was instructed not to leave until I got a "yes" from you.

Adam: Harrison, I...
Harrison: So it's settled then! Friday night. I'll let them know you will be in attendance. Oh and bring a date. Goodnight Mr. Randolph. Adam is dumbfounded...

Adam: Well this is just great. Now, where am I going to find a date at such late not---ice?


Adam: Agnes! Adam: Um, I have some things I need to do after work so we can close the office early tonight, Agnes.

Agnes: Yes sir. I'm just finishing up the last of the files. Is there anything else I can get you before you leave?
Adam: Actually... I kind of wanted to ask you a personal question. Agnes: Oh? What kind of question, sir? Adam: Well, I was wondering if you had anything planned this Friday night. Adam: See, I have to go to this "thing" Friday and I have to bring a da--... someone with me. Agnes: And you want ME to go? With YOU? Adam: You don't have to say it like that! I'm not that bad. Besides, it'll be fun. You might even get to meet some celebrities. Come on, what do ya say? Agnes: Um, sure. I'd love to go, sir. Adam: Perfect! So I'll pick you up around 7:00 Friday. Goodnight! Agnes: G'night, sir. Agnes: Wait a minute!!! Did he just say CELEBRITIES?!!! Agnes: Go, Agnes! To be continued...


Thanks for reading. Stay tuned for the next episode. I hope you like it so far...

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#1enid30May 19, 2013

good start \:D

#2martina hjMay 19, 2013

intresting!

#3AlessaFayeMay 19, 2013

Great start! Agnes is adorable! \:\)

#4^Cupcake^May 19, 2013

Interesting start!Agnes is so cute.
(By the way, picture 56 is AWESOME!)\:\)

#5ShylariaMay 20, 2013

Great start to your story! I cant wait to read the next chapter! Well done. \:\)

#6RoxillaMay 20, 2013

Very good start indeed - look forward to reading the next chapter! \:\)

P.S. Sorry to hear about your computer woes... horrible when that happens.

#7PaulasoulMay 20, 2013

Thanks you guys. I must admit I was discouraged by the low rating the story received, but I appreciate the positive comments. \:\)

#8meredithia20May 21, 2013

love! It's so mysterious and cool! Can't wait to read more! \:D

#9demonangel26May 22, 2013

This is amazing, so I don't know why it got such a low rating, someones trolling I guess, I gave 5. Anyway I wanted to comment on this sometime ago but I didn't have time then, great start.

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