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When The Dead Come Calling - 1
Published Jul 2, 2013


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My brain was not working so properly, Yet! i'm moving on horror stories -_- . lets see how it turns out.

My brain was not working so properly, Yet! i'm moving on horror stories -_- . lets see how it turns out. It was nearly 1975, In the Town of Fovutopia A young family that has been abandoned by their parents moved in a strange town.
Everyone knew that this town was haunted.
But this family forcing themselves to moved in an old house before seeing it because the rent was awfully low.
It was an old neglected rusty house on a side street in the oldest part of the town
Sometimes, people could hear the sound of girl laughing coming from that empty house and filled the street with her voice calling "Mommy, I'm scared" . Whenever that happened, people that would pass there just directly running hysterically and would say that the old house must have been the former home of a little girl who was searching for her mother. But this Girl, Lisa Morgan
Didn't knew about the house’s curious history.
and purchased the property right away.

"Worse than i thought"
And this little boy, Lou Morgan. his class mates said there was something odd about him and been told that he always react strangely when he was alone.

"Get ready to lose our strength tonight and tomorrow". he replied
It was terrible when they're inside. it's all filled with a dusty, rusty, old furnishings and the smell was awful.
There was many holes on the rooftop, and there's a plants that is growing near it. For them it was not sure if they could lived here for a long time looking at the situation around, it was impossible.
Nothing special left in there, but this old freak Doll is one of the exception.
The doll must have been staying for an about 50 years ago, or more than that.
Lou Morgan himself didn't noticed the doll presence.
But the doll itself was glancing at him, as itself was the owner of this house and was not happy to see this young family existence.
"Lou, i need you to do me a favor". Lisa asked with an ordering tone

"What is it?"
"We need our basic need to lived here, so do you mind searching for groceries store around here?. buy for what we really need for our supplies, don't buy your candy only! i gave you 100 simoleons isn't it? use that. i'll return back your money when you get back here. Any question?" "Where should i find the groceries store?". he paused for a while and continued. "I'm afraid i might get lost" He hesitated to answer. "Don't worry, you'll be alright. if you met somebody or saw someone on the street, try to ask them. easy right? Now go, get back here before the sunset, Okay?" Lou Morgan then left the house alone, He was being a wise, obedient, diligent and independent child, that happens when his family left him including his sister, Lisa. 30 Minutes has passed, Still Lou didn't find any groceries store around, not even a single man he met. It was that time Lou was feeling uneasy, a thick fog beside him was covering his mind.
he could feel something chilling around him

Hihihi
That sound caught Lou's attention. he turned and saw a view of a little girl who was swinging alone there.
but Lou doesn't feel that it was freak and scary. but he felt that he was Lucky to met someone that exist here.

"I think i should asked her."
"Umm.. Excuse me, wouldn't you mind to show me where the groceries store is?". he asked friendly

Lou was supposing to hear an answer, but the long black hair girl was ignoring him.
That time night­fall was ac­cel­er­ated the fog was beginning to cover the surroundings. the bright greens and browns of the lake beside him were be­gin­ning to bleed to­gether into a muddy gray. It wasn't last long, when all turn back when it was to be.
Lou himself narrowed his eyes that he realized something was missing,

"Strange, I saw a girl was swinging here before, where is she? or it might be that she's a ninja or something"
Lou was trying to think deep in his mind, try to find out what cause that the girl was missing, he doesn't even blink. he just in front of her. he blinked once and gone.

"A vision". he said with a serious tone
Lou wasn't suppose to stay there longer, he decide to continued walking and left that place, his mind was full of question about that girl but he manage to clear that off.
he knew that before was a ghost, and nobody knew that Lou could Seen something that is Unseen by anyone.
Just when he left, it was com­pletely dark. The tiny traces of sun­light that man­aged some­how to find its way down into the lake were hardly enough to see by, and were sur­rounded by vague dark long haired creatures her eyes managed to saw the little boy figure. I'm not sure i was being good at this stories. Huge Thanks and kisses for all of CC creators Been Appreciating your work till now!
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#15enid30Jul 5, 2013

creepy but good chapter xD

#16Fionitha2102Jul 8, 2013

Its Samara hahahah xD

#17FearlJul 14, 2013

Amazing start, dammit, I'm really curious right now !
I really love how everything suddenly gets dark when that girl is around, that's a good intrige you plotted right there. ;D

#18smileface101Jul 18, 2013

\:D \:D this is amazing I'll be awaiting the next chapter \:wub\:

#19didem03Jul 30, 2013

Wow!perfect chapter I'm waiting next chapters!\:wub\:\:D\:rah\:

#20BeaSimmerAug 7, 2013

That doll really creeped me out! The girl too though *-*

#21sery21Aug 17, 2013

Moreee please i love the story.....*-*

#22Katherine1091VIPAug 22, 2013

please go oooooon!!! \:\) that will be a great story \:D

#23Connor47Aug 30, 2013

Please Continue This Story.I Can't Wait Anymore\:wub\:

#24Brookie025Oct 19, 2013

OMG PLEASE CONTINUE. THIS IS SO AMAZING \:oO

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