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Against The Sunset
Published Jul 7, 2013


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My first story (Fifth attempt). Please feel free to leave creative responses.

My first story (Fifth attempt). Please feel free to leave creative responses. St Connors Bay
Ivarston Forest
12:07am

She ran. Her heart beating in her ears, the pounding growing with every step. The sounds almost deafened her, but she pressed on. The boots she wore were not meant for long periods of running or standing, but she refused to let her poor choice of work clothing stop her either.
"He's fast and has a lot of stamina; not like the others." Her skin was covered in small sweat particles which drew streaks on her skin as she ran after her target. As she ran closer to the little pond close to the road, she realised she couldn't see him anymore. "Damn! He got away." She stopped close to the body of water and observed her surroundings. Nothing. "I'm in trouble now." The beeping sound caught her attention. Her headset boomed with Orions voice. "Ya bag him yet Ru?"
She let out a heavy sigh. "No. He got away, was too fast for me. Though, it didn't seem like he wanted to fight to begin with."
"Ru, he didn't want to. He's a scout; Rank 1. Underlings aren't allowed to fight unless instructed to or need to defend themselves."
She bent over and caught her breath. "So what do I do now Ori?"
"Check out the city from Marrington Street Subway, maybe he'll be there it's closer to Ivarston."
She scoffed. "Doubt it, but I'm on my way."
St Connors Bay
Marrington Street Subway Station Out
12:39am

The city was alive, booming with lights as sweet smells drifted across. Her target was nowhere in sight. He got away. "Ori, I made it, but he's not here. Told you he wouldn't be."
"He's the least of our problems Ru. For now, head home and take a break, we'll meet up with the Guild tomorrow."
"Got it Ori. Until the Sun smiles once again."
"And the Sky embraces the Light."
She rubbed her neck and stretched her tired and pained body.
"I can't believe I just messed up. . . "
". . .I let a vampire get into St Connors Bay. . ."
Would like to hear your responses :) And if I should continue
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#6priscillamitJul 8, 2013

Well done! Looking froward for more \:rah\:

#7AlessaFayeJul 8, 2013

Amazing start! Anxiously waiting for the next chapter! \:\)

#8JennC32Jul 8, 2013

Great start, creative! Way to keep your readers wanting more, can't wait for the next chapter...longer next time please, I didn't want to stop reading! \:\)

#9emoryvalentinaJul 8, 2013

Can't wait for the next chapter. Please continue it.\:D

#10isyugerJul 9, 2013

Good start, I loved\:cool\:

#11rosesarehaughtyJul 10, 2013

Ooh! Sounds good \;\)

#12^Cupcake^Jul 10, 2013

You should definitely continue this story.So far it's very interesting!\:\)

#13fruitopiaVIPJul 11, 2013

Good story, keep it up

#14jumpgirl_64Jul 17, 2013

Wow! \:wub\: this is interesting, cant wait for more!

#15thepre10derJul 24, 2013

amazing!! can wait to see more!

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