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Message in a Bottle Intro
Published Sep 10, 2013


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Juzu

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This is my first Sim story, I hope I could get feedbacks to you guys.

A girl who seemed so lost and finding a way to get away from her life met a carefree guy who, after days spending time with him was the most wonderful person in the world for her.

A guy who just love adventure, living his days unpredictable was thrilled to met an unusual girl with lonely eyes beside the beach, without thinking he approached her not knowing it was the start of a beautiful romance that would finally shock his heart to it's depths.

This is my first Sim story, I hope I could get feedbacks to you guys.

A girl who seemed so lost and finding a way to get away from her life met a carefree guy who, after days spending time with him was the most wonderful person in the world for her.

A guy who just love adventure, living his days unpredictable was thrilled to met an unusual girl with lonely eyes beside the beach, without thinking he approached her not knowing it was the start of a beautiful romance that would finally shock his heart to it's depths.
The view was beautiful.
The beach was shinning and the air was salty and fresh.
The sand feels good under my naked feet...

but no matter how beautiful this place is... I can't make myself to appreciate it at the time like this, when my heart seems to sink...
I finally broke free from my 'bottled-like' life after I gathered enough courage to flee from that caged world and for me it was a huge step to change my life but looking at the bigger picture, it was just a first baby step I took after years living in fear of the outside world.
I should be happy but thinking thoroughly about the thing I've done made my heart sink.

I won't lie of being glad that I finally get myself free from my past but I don't know where to start...
I don't know where to go. I don't have money, I don't have clothes, I don't have anything but... me.

I cannot go back now...

'What should I do?'
Suddenly, a pair of feet came into her view.

"Um, are you okay?"

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#2MarijaJSep 10, 2013

Oh wow! This is really good start, it's mysterious, and I feel really sorry for the girl. \:\) Why so shoooooooort, haha? \:D And yes, I hate that we couldn't see him, lol. \:D
Don't take my comment too serious, I love to joke, all in all, beautiful, waiting for the next chapter, make it quick. \:wub\:

#3FiyaaSep 11, 2013

Interesting! More please. Hihi\:wub\:\:rah\:

#4JuzuSep 11, 2013

Thank you for your kind response! \:D

Chapter 1 is waiting for approval. ^^

Thank you very much for taking your time reading my very very short intro xD

#5smileface101Sep 11, 2013

The title is what grabbed my attention first and then the plot and to be honest it appears interesting \:D You've got an interesting story line no mistakes and best of all it's mysterious \:\) I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter \:rah\: wub:

#6martoeleSep 12, 2013

Nice short intro. \:cool\:

#7AlessaFayeSep 12, 2013

I understand it's an intro and should be short, but it was a great start, and wish there was more! \:D

#8Katherine1091VIPSep 13, 2013

Short but good \:D Now I'm interessted in how the story is going on.
She sounds really sad and I'd like to know what's happend in her past. Great intro \:\)

#9megumiRikazukieSep 16, 2013

I'm so curious to know who's exactly come near her~ \:D anyway, I'm sorry for my late reading on your lovely story
~R ^_^

#10paulandrew092891Sep 17, 2013

naks! positive mga comments ah... maganda... nambibitin haha!

#11mariacoraSep 20, 2013

nice intro \:rah\:

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