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Message in a Bottle- Chapter 7
Published Oct 8, 2013


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Juzu

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Message in a Bottle: Chapter 7-
~Not a stranger no more.~


Erin finally realizes her feelings for Jasper but… is it already too late?


*Thanks all CC artists!*
~Especially ‘You!’ Yes… YOU, the one reading this right now! :D
Thank you for continuously reading this story, all your comments are so… encouraging!*

Message in a Bottle: Chapter 7-
~Not a stranger no more.~


Erin finally realizes her feelings for Jasper but… is it already too late?


*Thanks all CC artists!*
~Especially ‘You!’ Yes… YOU, the one reading this right now! :D
Thank you for continuously reading this story, all your comments are so… encouraging!*
I don’t know what came over me, but upon realization with my feelings for Jasper. . .

I seemed to. . . Get hurt easily. Seeing him with Elvira; Him, chuckling over her confession. . .

I know it doesn’t make sense but. . .


It hurt me…



My mind was blank as the unshed tears sparkles through my eyes. I am too hurt to even cry.
I don’t know what I’m doing, my feet keep on running.

Then I was shocked and gasped when someone grabbed me from behind.

“Hey, what are you doing?”



Jasper said, panting. I can feel his moving chest in my back.



I’m too confused and was stunned.



“Why are you running away? You’ve been acting weird. Did I do something wrong?”



His voice is full of anxiety; I felt a painful guilt and at the same time, touched by his concern.
It's bittersweet.



“I—“



My voice cracks, betraying me.
I didn’t realize I’m also panting hard.

“Erin, what’s wrong? Please talk to me.”



He begged in his soft voice. I can feel his lips in my hair and I closed my eyes, one tear fell down to my cheeks.



Why am I so weak? I hate feeling like this...



He let out a soft breath and it brushes against my scalp, making all my hairs stand up.



“I promised to myself that I will never make you uncomfortable; to never ask questions that are sensitive to you; But most of all… I promised to take care of you. I am asking you because you are acting strange and I’m here to help you.”



He whispers clearly.



“You don’t have to do that… I’m a stranger--”

“Erin, can you hear what you’re saying? That’s stupid!”



He said exasperated and held me tighter.



“You are the only person I got to know this… close. We were together in my boat, doing adventures and no one… not even my family saw everything what you had experienced with me. Don’t ever say you’re still a stranger, because you are not. Not now.



He sighs.

“You were… when we met at the beach but for me, you’re a blessing came from God.



You know that I’m alone all these years doing my adventures alone... and God knows that even though everyday was exciting, unpredictable... it was not always happy. There are times I get lonely too...



but being with you made my world . . . real ‘HAPPY’.



He muttered the last words with very soft sincere voice and I melt at his arms.

“I’m sorry… I am . . . at loss for a moment . . . I didn’t know what to do.”



I whispered and held his arm tighter.



“So, could you tell me what happen?”



He asked softly and he gently rocks me, comforting me.



I close my eyes.

“Alex and I are talking about something important. It was a topic I was denying all the time and it made me uncomfortable.”

I sigh.

“But I’m being so naïve and well, I’m confused…”

Jasper just kept on listening and even though I’m nervous… I felt the push to tell him what I feel.

“I’m sorry if I got you the wrong idea. It was something about you and me, so… I just don’t know what to do.”

“Just like?”



I bit my lip and I blush as I remember my conversation with Alex.
“Oh, so I didn’t do anything wrong?”

I nodded and he chuckles with relief.

“Phe---ew, you don’t know how nervous I am!”

He laughs a breathy laugh.

“Okay, I understand. So… It’s an important thing between you and me, huh? Why are you talking with Alex about it? You should discuss it with me because the topic is for us.”

He tells me as a matter-of-fact.

“I-Yeah-u… I---“



“I like him…”



I blush silently, as if I could tell him like that!
“Alrighty, then. . . Imma gonna show you something great.”

He said and bending down to the sand.

“What are you doing?”

I asks, confused.


“Imma piggy back you, c’mon… we need to hurry.”

He asks with his boyish smile and I can’t help but laugh and do as he said.
“Ohh, this is going to be... awesome.”

I can hear a smile, excitement and nervous on his voice. I’m very intrigued.

“What and. . . Where are we going?”

I ask as he carries me towards the place he parked his speedboat.

“You’ll see.”

He grins his boyish smile at me and said nothing more.


Erin had a lot of things that was going through her mind, confusing her so much that she thinks she messed-up.




Because of limited experiences, she never knew how to handle those things.




Will Jasper be able to help her or make it worse?



What is the thing he wanted to show her?



Stay tuned!

Thank you for reading!
*Hugs and kisses*
-Juzu

-Message in a Bottle: Chapter 7-/


~Not a stranger no more.~


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#1Katherine1091VIPOct 8, 2013

Waaaaaahhhhh \:D What a great chapter!!! \:wub\: I love it!! \:D Oh I'm so excited to read the next one \:wub\: He is such a cutie! I wish he were real. \:D

#2AlessaFayeOct 9, 2013

Such a cute chapter, I love your screenshots! \:wub\:

#3fruitopiaVIPOct 9, 2013

This is such a sweet and cute story.

#4martoeleOct 9, 2013

Very nice and short chapter!

#5eviOct 9, 2013

Great chapter!\:rah\:

#6NisukiOct 9, 2013

Wah! Super lovely chapter! Oh my gosh, Erin you should tell, you should! T____T Where are they going~ !

#7MarijaJOct 10, 2013

Oh, man, so cute \:wub\: I'm reading the chapter 8 now. \:D

#8FiyaaOct 11, 2013

Very exciting!!! \:wub\:

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