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starting from zero
Published May 15, 2007


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simonita

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...another lonely and depressing place somewhere in the woods
...no soul seems to live here

...another lonely and depressing place somewhere in the woods
...no soul seems to live here
and another lonely existence... no money no job
just as if she would belong to here
...a penny dear gentlemann, just a penny for a poor girl?!
... you can have a dollar, but I would search another place, here is nobody...
honey this house is empty for ages, you wonīt find here anyone to help you...
...what should I do?? I lost my job,my flat, my boy, ...and even my baby for that he left me
...I think this is the right place for me to stay

..if I only could get inside... if this house is empty for so long time it would not matter if I stay here...
I try to find something to break in tomorow, but now I really need some sleep... oh, what to hell...!? who are you girl? and what are you doing here in MY house?!...
... oh sorry, I donīt..., I just... I have nowhere to stay, I just used this bench... Iīm really sorry!
... OK, OK, you could not know, I was out for long time, it can seem nobody lives here if you donīt know
... If you mind, you can come in, I donīt know how it looks like inside... as I said, I was out for ages...
oh sorry, Iīm Dusty... Rhodes... you have any name I should know?
I?! ... just Al... Alice
...when we get a bit order here, it should be a good place to live...
you can stay Al, if you want... I am not a really good companion... but youīr wellcome...
I will do the bedroom, you can go to have a look on the bath... ...oooh, is this stinky here... I donīt think this bathtub is going to work, the wood is totally rotten ...finaly we got it! what should we toast on? ...mabe a new life?!
...oh yea, it would be so nice to start from zero...
so Dusty, on our better new life!
...hey Al, I donīt think beginīfor money would bring you something out there...
what about getting a job?! I have here something, down in the town they are looking for a...

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#3marizza82May 15, 2007

More more !!\:rah\: Isn't this Marisa Bendet?

#4May 15, 2007

\:rah\: nice

#5AnniKaynaMay 15, 2007

mmmh...its a bit abrupt end,isnt it!? \:D
you must at least have written what job was offered in the newspaper... :P
anyway!
as beginning is not bad - I was quite surprised to find out that the house was Dusty's...\:cool\: but probably just because I already saw him in so many different siturations...!!! \:D
looking forward pt2! \;\)

#6sweetheartwvaMay 16, 2007

good start need more story please

#7atangkiMay 16, 2007

Don't take pictures on buy or build mode. \:D Good story by the way. \:D \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

#8spacemouseMay 16, 2007

Nice \:\)

#9May 16, 2007

A little short, and kind of confusing. But interesting.

#10sandybvvMay 17, 2007

\:rah\: why did you cut it, it was just getting interesting.!!! looking forward to next part.

#11SueAlJenMay 18, 2007

\:confused\: ...looking for a what? Please continue.

#12flashmasterMay 18, 2007

Nice story! Heart warming!
Use the designer booklet thing (next to the eye dropper) to get rid of the grid temporarily. \:P

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