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Erins story.
Published Jul 28, 2007


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When Erin met Jack she thoght he was so handsome and exciting,he had a charming way with everyone,her parents really liked him too.

When Erin met Jack she thoght he was so handsome and exciting,he had a charming way with everyone,her parents really liked him too. He was very funny and they soon became good friends. Erin was starting to fall for Jack,he was fun to be with and she was sure she could be happy with him for always. They went out on dates,played and teased each other and the love kept growing. Jack took Erin out to a nice restaurant and asked her to marry him,she said she had been waiting for this very moment to happen,they drank wine and laughed together,she was so happy. Erin had to tell her mum the news, "are you sure you truly love him ? asked her mum, "YES YES YES" she said excitedly.Her mum wasnt impressed,they had only known each other a few weeks,she asked Erin to wait awhile,and see if she felt the same in a few months at least, then she left. Erin rang her mum to try and talk her around but she was being totally unreasonable,they had a huge row and Erin put the handset down with a bang. Erin told Jack what was happening,"they just dont want me to be happy" she said. Jack said "you will be happy,i am taking you away from all this,i have a house on the coast and we will be married right away. So they took off into the night together.My knight in shining armour she thought. They married and Erin got a job playing the piano in clubs and bars,it wasnt that Jack didnt have money but things had changed,he was like Jekyl and Hyde,nice then nasty. Erin tried hard to make him happy,but it was an uphill struggle,she was determined to make this marriage work. Jack came to the club one night and told her he was taking off,he didnt love her,he had someone new. Erin started to cry then sob,she could hardly breath everything went black and Erin felt like she was sinking into a big dark hole. Erin awoke in hospital to the doctor looking down on her."Really tragic news,im so sorry but i have to tell you that your husband was involved in a car crash,he didnt make it" Erin was stunned.The doctor continued "but there is some good news,you are ok and you didnt lose the baby" . "BABY,i didnt know, When Erin was well enough to go home,she found a job and worked really hard,making plans for her and her child,it took months to feel almost normal again and at least she had the beach house although it held memories rather forgotton. The day came and baby Jane arrived,now she new it had been worth staying alive,she loved Jane so much and Jane loved her mummy too. Nanny was so good,she did extra hours so Erin could go out,she had met a man and was getting feelings for him,his name was John,he was an ordinary type of guy but sweet,the opposite to Jack,but that was a good thing. Jane was now a toddler , working and looking after jane was a full time job,she hadnt told John she was a mother and it was hard to tell him now,she should have been honest from the beginning but she had been through so much. John sent Erin an Email saying he was coming over ,he had a special question to ask her, Ihave to finish it she thought,it wont work. I cant expect him to raise another mans child,i love him but i must let him go. Erin stayed home and spent time with Jane,playing,teaching,reading to her, but at night alone in her bed she thought of John,she wished things had been different,if only she had met John first. One day Erin took Jane to the club she used to work in,she said hi to some old friends then she walked straight into John".Meet Jane my daughter "she said,what else could she say,he would probably hate her now. Jane wanted to play the piano for John,he was very impressed with her,what a lovely child he thought,so like her mother.He had wondered why Erin had dumped him,now he understood. John came and took Erins hands in his,"i still love you Erin,marry me and i will be a good Dad to Jane. She didnt say a word but he knew her answer was yes. They did marry and they bought a new house on the outskirts of pleasantview. A fresh new start. Now she knew what it was like to be truly loved. They became a very happy little family and that night at dinner Erin and John told Jane that she was getting a new brother or sister,nanny was pleased too,it meant she could stay on for a few more years.
Next day when John had gone to work and Jane was at school Erin sent an email to her Mother,it was time to try and work things out with her.She invited her over for dinner that evening. Kate came over and was happy to meet Jane and John,"hes a nice man" she said to Erin.after the meal,the others had an early night to give the women chance to be alone. The talk was a bit stained at first,but soon things eased up and the mother,daughter feelings took over. Erin told her she was sorry for running away and her mum explained how it had broken her heart to lose her only daughter.They chatted until they were both really tired,but they were very happy. As they said goodnight,they promised to never let anything or anyone come between them again. Erin knew life could only get better from now on. A few days later, the new baby arrived,they decided to name her Katey after Erins mother.now they were a family of four. and Erin gave John the most precious gift anyone could ever wish for.


THE END. or is it just the beginning?

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#15bingochao1Aug 29, 2007

wow cool \:D

#16andi and grimSep 13, 2007

WOW! this is a really good story you sholud write more of this but it might be difficult. 5.0! \:rah\:

#17happyb8888Sep 18, 2007

Wonderful story. Nice ending. A sequel would be nice though. Excellent screenshots! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

#18qvisnSep 19, 2007

My hubby just read this and was suprised,he didnt know i had any talent, (thanks a bunch man) he cant type so i had to do it for him.\:P

#19Merin68Oct 24, 2007

This was really good. Good luck with on further stories.

#20123456789_1234Nov 19, 2007

cool:

#21EnthroxDec 8, 2007

Wow, great job. I had fun watching and reading it.

#22iskrapercinkovaDec 22, 2007

nice story \:wub\:

#23iskrapercinkovaDec 22, 2007

\:rah\:

#24Apr 1, 2008

Very lovely.

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