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Looking for love - chapter VI
Published Nov 4, 2007


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Who is that little young lady? Let's go closer...

Who is that little young lady? Let's go closer... Oh, this is our little Lottie playing with Jonathan.
- And up!
- Lottie... there are only five days to your birthday... So, is there anything that you want to get?
- Well... I have everything that I ever wanted. You, Penny, Chris and Ethan. What more can I ask for? But... yes, there is one thing.
- What? Tell me, please.
- A puppy...
- Now we live in a big house... so why not?
- Oh thank you Jonathan! But what will Penny say?
- Don't worry, I will talk to her.
- My sweetest darling! Come here!
- Jonathan, stop or you will squeeze me to death, hee hee!
- Okay, tell me what brings you to me.
- You always impress me when you already know that I am going to aks you for something.
- Well, I'm your wife.
- You know that Lottie will be a teenager soon... so I thought that we should give her something different than toys..
- Yes, I was thinking about it too. Did you know what she wants?
- Yes. A puppy.
- A puppy? Are you serious?
- Yes. I talked to her today and she told me that she already has got everything that she ever wanted... except dog.
- If it's true... we must start our searching for perfect puppy!
- I knew that you will say yes!
- It it obvius for me. I loved her so much that I can't say no!
(Lottie's Birthday)

- City shelter? It's Penelope Brown. You can bring him up here.
- Did you hear the news? - Chris asked his brother.
- No...
- Lottie will get some fantastic present for her birthday.
- How could you know that?
- Because I heard parents' chat.
- We will see - said Ethan. How he do it that he always heard everything interesting before him? - aked himself.
- Little princess, come here. Someone's waiting to meet you!
- I'm coming! - replied Lottie.
When she came down she couldn't belive her eyes. A little doggie was sitting on a couch!
- A puppy! Oh, thank you soooo much! I never thought that I will get him! - she was so full of joy. Now she have everything what girl could ever wanted. She can't belive how lucky she was.
- Thank you, Jonathan. You made my dreams come true! Thank you that I can abe a part of your family. - Jonathan hugged her so much, because he couldn't stop his tears from falling. In that moment he realized how much he loved this little girl and how much happines she brings to their life. Without her this family won't be a family. Penny was touched too. - Come here my... daughter.
- Daughter? Is this mean... that I can call you mommy?
- Of course. You always could, because I love you with all my heart and you are a part ouf our family.
- Oh... thank you!
- Hi puppy! I will take care of you and we will be friends forever! - she grabbed her new friend and start to hugging him and kissing. - And you know how I will call you? Axel!
- Woof, woof! - Axel replied.
- It's time to blow candles! Do you already know what will you wish for?
- Well.. maybe for a little sister! - Lottlie laughted. - I was joking!
- Welll... why not? - Jonathan winked to Penny.
- Lottie, Lottie! - everybody was calling.
So she blew the candles and start a new chapter of her life. Now she is a teenager.
(Three years later later)
"I know that they will be dissapointed, but that's my own decision. Now all I have to do is tell them". - Mom, dad! Can we talk in the livingroom? - she called.
- Well... let me tell first. I was thinking about it for a long time. I know that you always wanted me to follow dad's footsteps... but I don't. I don't want to go at the University.
- Lottie... I don't know what to say.
- But you don't. I met someone... - she starts.
- A boy? That's why you don't want to continue your education?
- Yes. He has got a really good job. And we decided together that when we get married, I will stay at home and he will work.
- When you get married?! - Jonathan was shocked. - Lottie, you are a child! What are you talking about? Please, think about it again...
- But I'm sure. Maybe I'm not an adult now, but soon I will be. And I want to live my own life and make my own decisions. - Lottie felt that one more word and she will starts to cry. But she can't. She remember what Brad told her: stay calm and don't give up! But why he isn't here with her and he don't know how scared she is!
- Jonathan, stay cool. I'm sure that our girl know what she is doing. Honey of course it's your life. We can only give you some suggestions, but decision is up to you. But I'm sure that you agree with me-maybe you will invite your boyfriend at Saturday? We can eat together and talk to you two. - But what about boys? - Lottie asked. - I don't think that they should be here, I'm sure that they will make some jokes.
- Well... I will talk to them. If they will do something stupid they will be punish.
- Ok. So I will talk to Brad. - said Lottie.
- Brad? It's Lottie... Yes, I did. And they want to met you this Saturday. Really? Great! So see you! Bye. And I love you too. (Saturday evening)
- Lottie! How good to see you! - Brad hugged her girl and give her a long, sweet kiss.
- I missed it so much... Come inside, you will meet everyone...
- Mom, dad, Chris, Ethan... this is Brad. - Lottie introduced her boyfriend.
- Nice to meet you, Brad - everyone's replied.
- Come, sit down and talk about yourself a little - said Penny. - I'm just finishing dinner. Do you like fishes?
- Of course, I love them! - Brad said enthusiastic.
- Great - she smiled.
- So, Brad... what are you doing? Lottie dind't tell us about you. Maybe she was afraid that we won't like you? - Jonathan joked. - Well... I'm a computer pogrammer. This is what I love to do. I'm glad that I find a job that suits my interests.
- What else you like to do? - asked Penny.
- Gardening, cars...
- Yeah right... Brad tell me one thing.
- Yes, Chris?
- Don't you think that you are too poor for Lottie?
- Well...
- You are too poor, too stupid and too ugly for her! Leave her alone!!
- Why are you saying all this things? I don't think that I'm too poor for her. I've got a good job, so what's the problem?
- But you are the reason why she won't go at the University! - Chris yelled.
- Wait a minute, Chris. That was only HER decision! - Brad answered.
- Chris... please stop! Why are you doing this... telling all this terrible things? I don't recognize you! - Lottie started to cry.
- If you want it, I can dissapeard from your life! - he yelled and run from home.
- I will follow him... - started Jonathan, but Lottie was faster. - No, I will.
- Why are you doing this to him?... to me? Can't you be nice? I told that we're friends. What's wrong with you? Do you really wanted ot ruin my life? - Lottie cried. - You really wanted to know why I am doing this? Because I'm tired of being your friend! I don't want it anymore!
- But why...? Why are you hurting me? - she asked through tears.
- You really want to know why?
- Because I love you! - said Chris and kissed her passionatly.
Sorry that this part took me so long ;) If you want to know when the next chapter will show up-write it in my gb :)

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#81ayotola1Nov 9, 2007

ZOMG!! HER BROTHER LOVES HER WOAH!!!!! GREAT GRAPHICS 5.0 ALL THE WAY!!!

#91ayotola1Nov 9, 2007

I forgot to rate oops\:o

#10muggelx1Nov 10, 2007

Very nice story i like it\:P

#11ValgridaNov 16, 2007

I like this story a lot!\:wub\: \:\)

#12123456789_1234Nov 20, 2007

nice \:\)

#13lulu15Dec 1, 2007

amazing story\:D

#14misha1013Dec 18, 2007

i loved the story it was grat when is the next part\:wub\:

#15donaldchJan 13, 2008

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#16arc1801Jun 26, 2008

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#17wewe78Sep 14, 2008

next chapter make more!!!!

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