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The Gingerbread House.
Published Dec 7, 2007


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The Gingerbread House.

The Gingerbread House. This is the witch who lives in the house made of goodies. Chrismas eve and Grace,Ginny and Greta were telling thier parents it was time to visit Grandma. Dad told them to go staight there and he and Mum would see them later." Ring me when you get there" he warned them. It was onlt two streets away and they had done it before. Mum would ring Grandma and let her know they were on their way. It was freezing out and they could feel the first chill of snow coming so they put on their warm outdoor clothes and headed off. Ginny saw the forest with the house of sweets and ran across the road to have a closer look. The others followed warning her to not go too close. "We should go staight to Grandmas" Grace told them, "we might get into trouble if were late." But they were not listening to her so she followed them, she was the eldest even if it was only by five minutes and she needed to look after them both. They ran through the trees and had a close look at the house, it looked so yummy they wanted to see if they could actually eat some. The girls peeped into the window and saw the witch eating her breakfast. she looked so scarey and they were worried she might catch them and put a spell on them. "Lets get out of here" whispered Ginny" and they ran back to the street. "Come on, lets hgave another look" challenged Greta," unless your scaredycats." She laughed and went back to the house with the others following behind. When they got to the house again, there was no sign of the witch." She must have gone for a walk in the woods to collect rats tails and frogs legs and stuff for spells, oh i hope she doesnt catch us"said Ginny. The house was dark and dingy and the Girls saw the cookies piled high on the plate, they knew they should'nt be in here and were feeling a mixture of excitement and terror. Well, the cookies won,they had to have them. They didnt realise that it was a trap to lure children into the house and if caught they would probably never go home again. Then she appeared in the kitchen from nowhere. she looked at the girls eating her home made cookies. "You are here at last then, I have been waiting for you all to come." The three sisters were very happy to see Grandma, "we would'nt miss your cookies for anything Grandma" said Grace happily. Grandma laughed with glee, Santas cookies are the ones you all love, how could i not make them? now i had better ring your Mum and Dad to tell them you arrived safely" Thanks for reading and i hope i got you,Big time.

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#49happyb8888Dec 10, 2007

You got me!!!!! hahahaha

#50LuecyDec 12, 2007

Cool story, keep up the good work..\:D

#51josh1092Jan 12, 2008

O M G! I think yew got meh! \:o Wait! So like they are going to Grandma's house and tghey go to the candy house and the Witch there puts a spell on them making them think it's their Grandma? \:o BTW I'm gonna give yew a high rating for fooling meh! :P

#52josh1092Jan 12, 2008

No no wait! It's there Grandma yeah? O M G I'm so confused! Yew really got meh! \:P Celebrate because yew got meh! xD

#53DragonessGirlJan 20, 2008

The twist in the end did get me! Very nicely done! //Dragoness

#54cptnemo6Jan 24, 2008

very good story \:rah\:

#55SuzanHuniBuniJan 24, 2008

That was a surprise ending! Great job!

#56SeerlynJan 28, 2008

Great job!!!!!!! Nice story!!!!!!!!!!

#57primavera77Mar 5, 2008

very nice story!great!\:\) \:\)

#58maxi kingMar 9, 2009

\:wub\:sweet story!\:wub\:

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