Perfect....Maybe Not Chapter 1
Published Dec 25, 2007

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Hello and welcome to the first ever chapter of Perfect....Maybe Not. I hope you like it. First it is Time to meet the characters of my story.

Hello and welcome to the first ever chapter of Perfect....Maybe Not. I hope you like it. First it is Time to meet the characters of my story. This is Mac he is 14 years old. He is the person that not most people know alot about. You will find out more aobut him as we go along. So continue on. (ha ha it rymed sort of). This is Derek he is 15 years old. He is the popular Jock that everybody knows everything about and girls love him. This is Mac's sister Malrie she is 13 years old. She is also the best friend of Fawn. This is Fawn she is 13 years old. SHe is the kind of girl that just by the things she does just makes you wan tto give her a big hug. Shh Class be quiet you only have about ....RING RING Never mind you are exused for lunch.
Malrie left right away she wanted to be first one out so she could get out of the classroom and be free from here teacher. Mac was about to leave when he saw out of the corner of his eye Fawn exept she was talking to Derek. He wondered what he was asking her. Mac: It was weird .
Malrie: What was weird?
mac: At the end of class Derek was talking to Fawn.
Marlie: Really thats great. Do you know how big of a crush she has on him?
At that moment Mac's heart felt like it had been dropped of a building.
Just then Fawn came running in. She ran and sat down.
Fawn: Guess what Derek asked me out for some pizza tonight.
Wow I bet you told him off right.
There was an award silnce untill Marlie broke it.
Marlie: Um we better get going to class or were going to be late again.
END OF CHAPTER 1 sorry it is so short it is sort of an intro.

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#3EnthroxDec 26, 2007

I am seeing lots of University stories lately and I like them, including yours. Good job.

#4Claudia35Dec 26, 2007

i like it!!!! i can't wait to read more\:rah\: \:D \:D

#5janellevqVIPDec 26, 2007

Pretty good! You might want to make it a tad longer, but I liked it.\:wub\:

#6thekewlestnerdDec 26, 2007

Great story - but I do wish it were a bit longer!

#7seelindarunDec 27, 2007

I liked that it was short! \:D It did make me curious to read more about what happens to your characters. The dialogue is very natural. Keep it up, and don't worry about whether your story is long enough. Not every story has to be an epic, as long as interesting things happen to the characters. \:rah\:

#8kissme87Dec 27, 2007

Good job . Will be waiting for part 2

#91ayotola1Dec 27, 2007

I LOVE THIS! Please make more! It's interesting how Fawn doesnt like Mac, while he's in LOVE with her! I feel kinda sorry for him though\:rah\: 5.0!

#10aaaaaaacDec 27, 2007

Great Story!\:rah\:

#11samcactus101Dec 28, 2007

Lol I agree with everyone so far\:D \:D This is truly intriguing, can't wait for the next part!\:rah\: \:wub\:\:wub\: BTW, why are they all in the same class when they're different ages?\:confused\:

#12primavera77Mar 4, 2008


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