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Hurricane - Ch.1
Published Mar 29, 2012


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Catiarp

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Hurricane
Chapter 1, «Bad Impressions»


I want to apologize for such a short chapter, but I considered this over and over and I got to the conclusion that this is more like an introduction (although it doesn't reveal that much) and I REALLY promise that the next one will be bigger!

Er, just one last thing... As I don't speak English by nature, I apologize (again) for any mistake that would eventually come up through out the story. I'm trying the best I can to make this at least readable. Now yes, I'm going to shut up.

Either way, enjoy!

Hurricane
Chapter 1, «Bad Impressions»


I want to apologize for such a short chapter, but I considered this over and over and I got to the conclusion that this is more like an introduction (although it doesn't reveal that much) and I REALLY promise that the next one will be bigger!

Er, just one last thing... As I don't speak English by nature, I apologize (again) for any mistake that would eventually come up through out the story. I'm trying the best I can to make this at least readable. Now yes, I'm going to shut up.

Either way, enjoy!
A tree house, seriously?, I asked myself upon seeing the pile of old wooden planks which rose unto the sky. This is so not what the real estate agent said it would be. Well, it will have to do. At least I'm safe here.

With two bags on each arm, I went up the several hauls of stairs, already cursing its extension. I put them down, removing from the jeans pocket the keys that were once given to me. I noticed I was shivering, making me feel stupid when faced with this reaction. It's just a house, for God's sake...
Hesitant, I inserted the key into the rusty lock and opened the door. I never regretted a decision as soon as it happened at that precise moment. You just got to be kiddin' me...

The smell of humidity instantly crossed my olfactory field, foisting me an expression of disdain along with the old and rusty aspect of the few furniture that featured in a single room. Nor I dared to enter the bathroom. Basically everything was falling rotten.
But on second thought, it wasn't that bad. I could always make some improvements to turn the house into a space more pleasant and more... mine. I added a shopping trip to the mental tasks list. The bed, despite the bad aspect, invited to a few good hours of sleep. Following its seductive whisper, I sat in the same, receiving in exchange some springs creaking and musty smell. A nap wouldn't hurt anyone. The new city could wait. For now.

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#1starsky524Mar 29, 2012

Your pictures are really good! I couldn't find any mistakes and I'm actually really picky when it comes to stories so I think yours was really good! 4 stars (because it's short)

#2spladoumMar 30, 2012

Heh heh, stinky house \:D  I've been there more times than I care to admit ... and bad smells definitely make a place feel ominous!

#3torija0709Mar 30, 2012

Very good screenshots! \:rah\:

#4MangioMar 31, 2012

Intriguing \:wub\: And your english is fine, no need to worry. Except i worry about the house and girl...

#5annabel_leeMar 31, 2012

Good job! I can't wait for the next chapter..

#6fabrizioammolloMar 31, 2012

Fascinating introduction!

#7ImpellentMay 10, 2012

\:wub\:
SWEET MOTHER OF GOD, AM EXCITED FOR THE NEXT EPISODE. GOOD STORY

#8KatherineLady09Jun 5, 2012

Very lovely pictures, can't wait for the next part

#9opel5Jun 25, 2012

Great introduction and nice pictures, I'm going to read further \;\)

#10KuwaitisJul 8, 2012

What a great introduction nd Shots Keep the good work on. \:wub\:

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