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The Game Of Minds
Published Feb 10, 2012


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mladen jevtic

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The story about the girl who revealed something she shouldn't

The story about the girl who revealed something she shouldn't It was 8:00 AM, and Maria was sleeping in her bed. She had a very hard day yesterday because she have to stay at work late. When suddenly her alarm clock starts ringing like a nut...
Maria: WTH! Is it 8 already...I cannot sleep anymore without being interrupted by someone... I guess I should wake up?
After one hour, she did get up. And first what she did is sit on her computer to check all messages on Facebook, twiter etc....
Maria: What?! Danielle has made up with Josh!Unbelevable!That cow!She She can get a boyfriend but me, no...I am so lonely...
Maria:Oh I got a message, finally someone to remember me...
It was Milla her best friend.
Milla: Hey u stop off over if u have time. We didn't see each other in a whole week!The The coffee is ready :P
Maria: Oh how sweet of her. Thak's god it's Saturday! "I'll come over Milla just to go to bathroom :) "- she text to her.
That's it.I'm so beautiful today. I can go now.OMG I forgot about that tonight.I can't believe, I'm so happy. Maria:I finally got here. It was such a traffic jam.Is everything is OK, u look a bit different?
Milla:Oh, i did a little haircut. Do u like it I? thought I needed a little change. What were u doing all this week?
Maria:Nothing special...
Milla:Are you sure?What about that math professor?
Maria:OMG i totally forgot about that!Well he invited me tonight to that gallery in town, they are celebrating something I'm not sure what but I don't care as long as I go with him...
Milla:You mean that building who looks like vampires are living there?You gotta be kidding me!
Maria:Yes,what's wrong with that...at least i have a date unlike someone...oh I'm so excited!
Milla:Calm down, i'm just kidding.But can i please go with u?PLEASE!!I'm dying of boredom.If u don't I will call u all night.Think about that, I can meet someone there!
Maria:All right, u can go...You will wait me there at 7:30 PM.Don't be late!And there's another thing...
Milla:What's the problem?
Maria:I don't have dress.It's special occasion,it must be elegant and beautiful...
Milla:Well than I know right thing for you!We will go in that new boutique, they have dresses like that!
Milla:Will you ever found that dress,you are searching for decades!
Maria:I think I like this one...I'll take it!
Milla:Where did u saw that?I certainly missed it!Well it's a good piece of cloth, you should definitely buy it...
Milla:Oh, I forgot to tell you!Your mum called she asked me why did u turn your phone off.she told me to tell you that u must call her she has something important to tell you...
Maria:I wonder what it is...Well i will call her tomorrow, i don't have time right now!She is probably going to tell me how i forgot about that wedding a week ago...Mums!
Milla:Well I gotta go, see u tonight!
Maria returned home when her telephone rang.
Maria:Hello
Luke:Hey it's me, I call you to remind you for tonight
Maria:I didn't forgot(How can I forgot about that).Tonight at 7:40, right?
Luke:Yes...Well see you then!Bye
Maria:Bye
Luke:Hey Milla, What are you doing here?
Milla:I just stop by to the party!
Luke:Oh, interesanting...anyway where is Maria?
Milla:Well she told me she would be late.But she will come in a moment...
Luke:hmm, ok...
Milla:Look there she is!What a hottie! And there was Maria in her new dress.
Luke:Hey
Maria:Hey Luke
Luke:You look beautiful!
Maria:Thanks,shall we go in?
Luke:Oh yes of course...sorry I'm a bit confused..
Maria:Haha I see...
Maria:This picture is so inspirational, don't you think?
Luke:Oh yes the picture..Sure it is...
Maria:God must be a painter.Why else would we have so many colors...
Luke:So you are a painter?
Maria:That's my hobby...hehe
Luke:What's so funny? hehe
Maria:Nothing...Shall we go outside it's getting hot in here.
Luke:Oh, yes sure...after you.
Luke:Better now?
Maria:Yes, it is.
Luke:You look so adorable tonight...
Maria:Thank you.
Luke:Can I ask u something?
Maria:Sure!
Luke:Would you like to close your eyes so I can show you something?
Maria:All right...
And then he showed her the best kiss she ever had...
Maria:Oh i don't know what to say...
Luke:You don't need to...
Maria:Hey..I hope you don't mind but I need to find Milla to ask her something.It will take a second!
Luke.Off u go!I'll wait you at the main hall.
Maria:OK
Maria:Oh..I think I'm a bit lost...this place is so big...ooh not now pleasee.What the...Who are you? The Women:Listen to me I don't have time to explain...but you are in a great danger!You must be carefull!Do not tell anyone that you saw me and don't you dare to follow me!-and then she runs away.
Maria:What did just happen?!Who is she?Did she say DANGER?!Ooh I'm so confused...I got to get out of here!
Maria:Listen Luke I'm sorry but I gotta go...It's nothing about you!Please don't be angry!!
Luke:It's ok...are you all right?U look scared?
Maria:It's nothing...I'm fine...I'll call you tomorow.See ya!
Luke:Bye...
Maria:My head is going to explode!!!Is that someone in my apartment???

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#2suza93Feb 11, 2012

It's an interesanting story...finally something new \:D <3

#3snowsnow2133Feb 11, 2012

o-o oh god, last slide made me laugh/scared X) great story! deffinitly is something different!

#4Clara92MillerFeb 11, 2012

ha ha...It's so funny and mysterious in the sam time \:D i wonder what will happen next :P

#5GusluckyFeb 11, 2012

Interesting story! \:\)

#6DanielleHeartBigFeb 11, 2012

It's funny \:D I like how u combine humor and the horror at the same time \:D

#7starsky524Feb 11, 2012

Wow! Great story! Nothing like I've seen before! 5 starz! \:D

#8keishafellerFeb 12, 2012

hum.. lol.. that woman who appeared at the party was just.. mysterious..

#9jumpgirl_64Feb 12, 2012

Very Interesting Story and that mysterious woman at the end.\:cool\:

#10anna91FOXFeb 13, 2012

Great story! \:D i wonder who is that woman at the end \;\)

#11fabrizioammolloFeb 16, 2012

Interesting.

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