Back
UnSpoken Words
Published Aug 6, 2012


Written By

SimplySweet

Storyteller
521Views4.9Rating

Page 1 / 13

OMG!!! This is my first story ever!!!

I want to thank Daphney1230 for helping me with this short story in such a short amount of time!

I hope you guys like! Do me a favor and tell me what you think and go read Daphney1230 stories!

OMG!!! This is my first story ever!!!

I want to thank Daphney1230 for helping me with this short story in such a short amount of time!

I hope you guys like! Do me a favor and tell me what you think and go read Daphney1230 stories!
My heart sunk when I heard the love of my life say the words,

“I’m leaving you for Becca.”

I stood still trying to grasp the concept of the two people I loved most betraying me.
“I’m sorry Lilly, but things with us fell apart a long time ago. I know you have felt it.”

I said nothing- thinking that the feeling was not mutual. I was still living on cloud nine until now, and I was thinking he was as well. There was no sign of him being unhappy, or maybe there were and I just ignored them.
“I don’t feel the same anymore about us, there isn’t any hope. I tried to stick around and see if it would work out, but again I say the feeling is gone," he said trying to hold my hand but I step away from him, “I still love you and I don’t mean to break your heart.”

How can he not mean to break my heart, he’s leaving me for my best friend?!? I’ve been with him for almost four years and he is just going to leave me and all our memories.
I stared at him wishing he could read my mind and feel what I feel at this very moment. I looked deep in his eyes, searching for the answers to my questions: Why Becca? Why would you do me like this? Of all people, why my best friend?!? As on cue, he answered my questions.

“I guess you’re wondering why Becca? Well, she knows me best, we mesh well together, and she likes things that I am in to. Also she…” he said getting a little excited as he spoke about the woman he is leaving me for.
I began to cry. “Please don’t cry Lilly, it’s killing me to do this, but I wanted you to know. It wouldn’t have been right for us to carry on behind your back; you deserve the truth.” I shook my head, wishing that this bad dream ended, but no matter how hard I shook my head, my nightmare never ended.

It was getting dark and a little bit chilly. I began to rub my arms to stay warm.
“I’m sorry Lilly,” he said kissing my forehead, “Becca and I are leaving the state, so we can get a fresh start. If I could make this situation better, or soften the blow I’m giving you, I would, but a break up is always painful. I hate to leave you, but Rebecca and I have a plane to catch.”

I stood there feeling like a fool. I wanted to be angry but I was too hurt to be so.
“You haven’t said anything throughout this whole conversation; will you please say something?”

I said nothing.

“Well if you’re not going to say anything, I must go.” He hugged me goodbye and walked to his taxi.
As he drove away, I spoke my first words. “Greg, I’m Pregnant.”

~~THE END~~~

Hope u guys like! Thanks again for reading my story and please rate high. Again thank you Daphney1230 for the help. We will have to do it again!!!

Other Stories

Add a Comment

Please report any offensive comments so we can remove them. Use of bad language, unsuitable links or flaming may result in deletion of your account.

Add Smilie
Please log in to post comments

6 Comment(s) so far


New Comments are displayed at the bottom.

#1jadababy2003VIPAug 7, 2012

Wow...that is horrible. But I'm excited to hear the rest of the story.

#2urm0mVIPAug 7, 2012

Boo what a horrible man!!!

#3daphney1230Aug 8, 2012

Its finally here. I hope you can finish the series by yourself, but if you ever need my advice, you know how to get to me.=)

#4fruitopiaVIPAug 11, 2012

Wow, wasn't expecting that.

#5tamyaglassOct 31, 2012

This is a good story

#6The LadybugFeb 16, 2013

What a
...
Dunno what to write C:

Ad-blocker plugin detected

We have detected that you are using an Ad-blocker plugin. This means our main source of income to cover bandwidth costs is blocked when you are using our free service. We would ask that you whitelist us and allow ads to show.

Anyone using an Ad-blocker plugin will be forced to wait 30 seconds instead of 10 on the "please wait" page.


VIP Membership

For as little as $3.50 per month you can become a VIP member. This lets you use our service free of all ads and unlocks access to our popular Download Basket and Quick Download features.

Become a VIP member now
Proceed to download

Log in to TSR



Sign in with Facebook

Not a Member yet?

Click here to Register now

Close This Window

Close This Window

Please wait - loading...