New Story finished!

Hello everyone!

The first part of my new story is done. As soon as it is approved, I hope you will like it. I tried to improve my writing and it would be nice if you could compare my new story to my older story and tell me what you think about it. Did I this story better than the last one(s)?

Have a nice day! - Guslucky

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