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Models Of Paradise Island: Makeovers
Published Jul 5, 2010


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Thank you guys for all of your lovely comments! Im glad some of u r liking this story :)
Milly Fan
yay!! The last makeover...FOREVER!!

Thank you guys for all of your lovely comments! Im glad some of u r liking this story :)
Milly Fan
yay!! The last makeover...FOREVER!!
Milly checked herself out in the mirror (i think..) and then got her hair and makeup done. Her dreadlocks didn't make her look like a model-type girl, so Serena had to get rid of them.. Milly looks wonderful with her hair newly coloured, and paired with a black headband because everybody knows black goes with everything! Her makeup suits her style, complexion and her personality!! Yay progression!! Everyday Wear.

Serena: I am set on believing you are goth, or trying to look..old? The lace is ugly!! It is just the kind of fabric i see on my pillow when i wake up every morning! And that only does good for a pillow with a rectangle figure! Think about what that looks like on you. And those shoes? What is up with that??

You have chunky ankles HA HA HA!!
Everyday Wear.

Now lets just forget about that hideous outfit, and talk about this gor-geous one! The blue is beautiful on Milly and those shoes actually fit properly!! Thank you Serena for reviving those 'ankles'!!
Athletic Wear.

Serena: Firstly that sweater is just plain retro! Peace, love, hope? You sound so mellow or something! And those jeans? I can't possibly imagine anyone excersizing in skinny jeans!

Athletic Wear.

Wohoo! Finally a nice jacket! This looks incredible, the jacket and shorts match!! Plus the colours look fabulous!
Formal Wear.

*Cricket Cricket*

This is seriously formal wear? Wasn't that your athletic wear? Wow Serena must be angry about this one!

Serena: No comment.
Formal Wear.

Now this can be adressed as formal wear. Very functional cute purple dress for weddings, proms, and other fancy places.
Swim Wear.

I am getting two whole different vibes from this swimsuit!
I mean most of these people had to learn a whole lesson on matching! But wow this is terrible!! Flames, and blue.

Serena: Are you trying to put out the fire on your bikini top with that blue swimsuit bottom?
Swim Wear.

Now this swimsuit is to die for! The one-piece looks great with Milly's hair because it matches her headband! Go matching!!

Thank you for watching: Models Of Paradise Island: Makeovers! Milly was our last makeover *sniff sniff* Well i hope you liked the makeover part of the story! And I will begin to make the contest part of the story if i get at least 5 good comments! So please rate 5 and leave a nice comment!

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#1nataliestonardJul 6, 2010

Good start!

#2DVSVJul 6, 2010

Good story,nice island \;\)

#3simaddict94Jul 6, 2010

lol. The athletic and formal wear \:\) Great chap.

#4ohgodcaitlynJul 6, 2010

Your style of writing makes me giggle. Good chapter.

#5sokka841Jul 8, 2010

this was great. I liked the athletic and formal wear being the same. Onward!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

#6Hotlips_DKJul 13, 2010

<span id="result_box" class="short_text"><span style="background-color: #e6ecf9; color: #000;"><span style="font-size: large;"><em>Let the competitions begin \:wub\: </em></span></span></span>

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