With help from my little Brother
Published Jun 8, 2008

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Hope you like it no matter if you do or not ( i know i'm not very good) i plan on finishing that for a friends so yah you dn't have to read it if you don't want to.

Hope you like it no matter if you do or not ( i know i'm not very good) i plan on finishing that for a friends so yah you dn't have to read it if you don't want to. Jason Gomez
age: 15
Kyle Gomez
Age: 12
Claire Cook
Age: 14
Jason: Hey, um you want to go to the mall today or something.
Kyle: Jason, did Cassie dump you again?
Jason: What...I am appaled, can't an older brother take is little brother to the mall without being accused of have been dumped.
Kyle: Why'd she dump you this time?
Jason:Something about me being annoying and not trustworthy, and blah,blah,blah, so um are you going to come or not?
Kyle: I guess, but i'm only going to make sure you get a new girlfriend.
Jason: Ha ha yah your gonna help ME get a girfriend! (sarcastic)
Kyle: Do you want my help or not?
Jason: ok ok i was just kidding get in the car, i'll be out in a minute
Kyle: Yah thats what I thought
Jason's POV
What, I know he's my little brother but he has like this special way with the ladies.
30 minutes later
Kyle: God, your so picky you already turned down 10 girls that i picked for you.
Jason: Let's face it i'm hopeless!
Kyle: Wait what about that girl.
Jason: Actually she's pretty hot.
Claire: (looks around) me?
Kyle: Yes you, hey, see that guy over on the couch?
Claire: (looks over) ya
Kyle: He is my sad excuse for a brother, you see he has a hard time with the ladies and you look like a nice and hot girl. And I was just wondering if you could put him out of his missery, What do you say?
Jason: I'm so sorry about that he doesn't know what he's talking about..and...yah..well..not that your not hot..because you are..well..i
Claire: don't worry about it I think it's adorable, but you really don't have a girlfriend?
Claire: Well if you wanted to we could go out to eat or something.
Jason: realy that would be great, no wonderful, Awsome, sweet...
Claire: Hey I got to go but call me later, (hands number).
(Claire leaves)
Jason: Kyle, Remind me to take you everywere with me
Kyle: Yah..your if you will excuse me there a gumball machine over there calling out to me.
Jason: (shuckles and then smiles) You can have all the candy in the world!
ha ha it's not supposed to be a cliffhanger just an inro type thing

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#12hanzo11Jun 10, 2008

I am nearly 12 and I like gum too! yay! \:wub\: good story I will read the next one

#13kitfu11Jun 10, 2008

Ooh where'd you get the piercings for Jason? I really want piercings for my teens. \:D

#14binedet25Jun 11, 2008

Haha, taking the little brother to pick up girls - funny.

#15sexyannes...Jun 12, 2008

ohhhh thats so funny its lovely story i really love it \:wub\: and i love hair really love it\;\) i 5.0 for you

#16halfasian751VIPJun 12, 2008

hahahahaha..... his little brother is hilarious!!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

#17Jun 13, 2008

That was really good,great graphics and every thing great job\:rah\:

#18converse02Jun 15, 2008

nice... loved the sarcastic humor!\;\)

#19tangytangytangyJun 15, 2008

It was okay. I wanna read the next part.

#20Jun 18, 2008

Jason has WICKED hair!!!!!!\:D

#21blackbutterflysJul 14, 2008

i love the sims people\:wub\: \:rah\: \:P

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