Published Aug 20, 2009

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A brief story written for an 8-year-old girl



A brief story written for an 8-year-old girl

One night, that will be transformed in a special night, Lucy received an unexpected visit. It was Salvadora, the Extremously Bad Witch. - Lucy, I learned of your great skills, and I think you'll be interested in being one of my students. What you think about this? - wicked Salvadora asked.

Lucy, astonished by this recognition, said: - Of Course! You are the only one who noticed my capabilities.
- Perfect! I am glad your response! Takes this Darkness Book. It will guide your steps. Do not show it to anyone, please!
- ¡Oh, THANKS!!!!!
- Welcome, Lucy! You have a great future! You will not defraud me, I know!
- Thanks, again, I will not - Lucy saied atonished, while the wicked. Salvadora embraced her.
Finally Lucy was recognized and understood, She had found someone with her same ideas.
" Better, that Mummy and Nadia not see this book " - Lucy thought.
While Oriana and Nadia, remained in theirs business, they were unrelated to what had happened with Lucy... Lucy went to her hideaway, and she began to read the Darkness Book. Magically, their costume was changing from the Brown to black. Her pedestal and the very book became reddish.....
Her magic was leaving be neutral ... She was losing good skills and increasing the dark ones..
Oriana and Nadia, at the main hall, practiced with their wands. Lucy had not noticed them and inadvertently, while she came out, signaled her secret hideaway. - Lucy! What do you do there? What did happened to your dress?? Why is it black? - Nadia shouted desperate.
- Enough, I not bugging with your questions... – Lucy answered.
- Girls! Just discuss! - Oriana shouted.
The daughters made silence.
- Lucy, tell me: what have you been doing?
- Enough Mummy, you will not understand, as always...
- I see ... - Oriana saied – you go with your dumb ideas. What do you think? Do you not understand that you can not walk for life doing bad spells? Everything that you do, comes back, little girl ... Understand, please!.
- I don't want to hear you more, nor Nadia. I am tired of your blah, blah, blah... - Lucy shouted - If you do not understand me, then I LEAVE THIS HOUSE! GOODBYE!
Lucy took the Darkness Book and went from home, without being noticed that it was the worst thing she could do. Now she was alone, surrounded by bad energy.
She not noticed that her family tried to warn her:
The evil path you away from loved ones, evil that youdo comes back to you and you start to stay alone, without anybody wishing you.
But Lucy not understood.


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#1urm0mAug 20, 2009

I feel sorry for Lucy a bit

#2spitzmagicAug 21, 2009

Someone hurry,  must save Lucy!. This is a very good story. I am enjoying it very much...\:wub\:

#3damnanoirAug 21, 2009

Great Story! wanna see more! another 5!

#4fredbrennyAug 21, 2009

I think Lucy is going to learn the hard way...\:\( Like it!

#5MangioAug 21, 2009

someone help poor Lucy...\:wub\: cant wait to find out more

#6MJxoAug 22, 2009

Aww nice chapter\:D I really like it

#7notespeller2Aug 23, 2009

I really laughed at the "I am tired of your blah, blah, blah." I am going to say that to everyone who bothers me from now on! Love it!

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