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Why do they leave me ? Chapter 1
Published Aug 25, 2009


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Why do they leave me?

Chapter 1

By: Oriana S.M. (8 years old)

Why do they leave me?

Chapter 1

By: Oriana S.M. (8 years old)
This was a family consisting of: Jade and John, the parents, and their two daughters, Ela and Elli.
They were a common and happy family.
Ela and Elli, also of sisters, were best friends including. They loved to play together, jumped the rope, played the palms, jokes, and much more. They had the same tastes and interests. They shared secrets, told stories and they loved much. Jade and John were loved too much and they were very happy by having two sweetty and good.little girls. John was diver and gave classes of swimming. Jade was writer, and so spent all the time at home, where could care for their daughters and at the same time, write their stories to the computer.
The life not could have them treaty better.
Until a day, when Ela and Elli were teens, Jade and John died in an automotive accident.
The girls were left alone. No relatives that could deal with them
Pain and sadness joined them much more.
They learned to survive alone, not had alternative.
They should overcome pain and move forward.
They were so friends as before, when they were girls.
They never missed topic talk to.
They shared the tasks of home and went to school.
Luckily, parents had left them enough money in a bank account; therefore they not needed to seek employment and could devote to the study.
The sisters missed much their parents. Multiple pictures of them decorated the house and the girls observed them daily. Not spent any time in which Ela and Elli thought about them. They missed their talks, their loving hugs... They missed them. Unfortunately, some day the dishwasher stopped working .
Elli tried to repair it, but...
... An electroshock!!!
Elli left to Ela and went to meet with her parents...
Poor Ela! Once again she lost a beloved.
She did not know how she would exceed such pain... The loneliness is so sad.

The pain of her heart was terrible. She was turning crazy..
She spent days without leaving home, only sleeping.
She ate very little. She did not see to anyone.
She only thought in her parents and in her sister.
Several weeks passed until she could retrieve forces and return to school.
When winter arrived, Ela met a new partner of school. His name was Juan Manuel..
As they returned together in the school bus, they advantaged those trips to chat. And with the time they were beginning a very good friendship.
They did the school tasks together.
Juan Manuel, seeing Ela so lonely, spent every afternoon with her..
He was looking for thousand forms of entertain her and welcome her.
They shared sports outdoors, did together walks. Juan Manuel always achieved make her laugh.
Ela really considered him as her best friend.
And after of timeshare, Juan Manuel began to look to Ela with other eyes... He began to fall in love with her.
But... Would Ela feel the same for him? - Juan Manuel wondered.
A year passed since Ela met Juan Manuel and their friendship was increasing.
Ela loved so much to her friend.
He saved her from depression and loneliness.
But she never gave signals that she had some other type of sentiment towards him.
Juan Manuel, in secret, still loving Ela.
Perhaps someday he would encourage admitting their feelings.
A summer night, after dinner, Ela received Juan Manuel´s visit.
It was not usual he came to see her at those hours.
Juan Manuel had decided to speak with Ela of his love. He began to babble some words, he tried to approach to Ela and embrace her.
But Ela, sensing what would happen...
... She took away, and very clearly said:
-You know that I appreciate you too much and that you are my best friend

Poor John Manuel felt the broken heart. He could not say any clear phrase about his feelings.
Perhaps he had rushed.
Or perhaps Ela never would love him.
They never returned to talk about that night until, a few months later, Juan Manuel decided make another attempt
He wrote a letter to Ela, in which he said:
“Ela, you never let me to tell you everything that I feel for you. That summer night, it was not possible. Today, in this letter, I mean that I love you with all my heart”
Next day, Ela sent a letter in response to Juan Manuel:
“You are the most important person for me, Juan Manuel. You are my colleague, my friend. But I regret telling you that our relationship is only a friendship. I am sorry! Forgive me! I hope that my words will not destroy our friendship. Although I will understand if you prefer to take some distance.”

Another shot for Juan Manuel. He could not believe it. He would never cease to love her. But despite the sadness that he felt, and of not being reciprocated, he preferred being with Ela as friend in place of losing her forever.
Some years passed... Ela had inherited the skills of her mother. She was devoted to writing her first books.
Occasionally, she read the beautiful book that her mother had written for her and her sister, Elli. It was so beautiful! That book inspired her..
Juan Manuel, at the end of the school was included as officer of Police Department, in Research Office.
Constantly he practised sports and studied languages, because of his work, he might travel by all the world
Ela and Juan Manuel remained friends.
Although he continued loving her and was not reciprocated, he felt that he could not be self-interested and leave Ela alone, she had not anyone in this world.
Ela did not allow herself to love anyone, but only her secret diary knew the truth.
All the people to whom she had loved, had gone, had leaved her, life had stolen them.
She could not afford to lose anyone more. Her heart would not tolerate any more.
For this reason, she should maintain her relationship with Juan Manuel as a great friendship, and nothing more.

** TO BE CONTINUED **

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#12RepulsiveDesireSep 8, 2009

Is it wierd that I love sad stories? Well I loved yours and am looking forward to seeing where you take it

#13Jennifer_RSep 8, 2009

Great story but a bit sad. Poor Ela feels she cannot love anyone else in case they will die on her. I hope things look up for her soon, she is a sweetie! \:wub\:

#14martoeleOct 2, 2009

Yes, I like the story as well. I hope that you will continue it soon. \:\)

#15knowallOct 5, 2009

Great story. Also, thx for your wonderful comments. \;\)

#16Golden97Oct 14, 2009

Great Start \:\) very good \:\)

#17YaiaOct 25, 2009

That's a great story \:wub\: I like it

#18333maddie333Oct 31, 2009

Oh that is so sad I feel so bad for her

#19SpillelskerMar 21, 2010

Love it! \:wub\:

#20smexywalrusJun 27, 2010

:'( So sad... but i liked it\:rah\: Quick question-how do you get those pictures on slide 13??? Just wondering.

#21vivi_vivi224Sep 24, 2010

This was written with quite basic, even poor language for the most part, but there are also some quite good uses of wording. It is a sweet story, with a good plotline and it could easily be turned into a great work.

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