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Who is this stranger?
Published Aug 31, 2009


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mensure

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Sharon Morris. She had a simple life. She rented a small house at the Hidden Corner. She never think about that her life will change with the new neighbors moved. Now, her silent living was in the past. She spends her time to spying on the neighbors. Who is this stranger?

Sharon Morris. She had a simple life. She rented a small house at the Hidden Corner. She never think about that her life will change with the new neighbors moved. Now, her silent living was in the past. She spends her time to spying on the neighbors. Who is this stranger? Sharon promoted to Patrol Officer. She thought that it was time to get separate home. She rented a small house at the Hidden Corner. She was happy and peaceful in this beautiful place. Until that night... She heard a voice at outside. She looked out to the window. A foreign man was walking against in the garden one of the empty house. He was walking in the garden and peeking through the window inside the house. He was like looking for something. He has been around a bit more and he went. She was wondering, what was he looking for and next day she went to investigate. She was peeking through the window. There was some boxes in the middle of the room. She could not wait more and forced to open the door. The door easily opened. She was inside. What were this package? When were brought? Who brought? Did that man?
-"Impossible", she thought.
-"He didn't stay longer. I'm sure, I would hear the noise"
She thought that all day. She was cleaning the house, cooking, reading a book but she could not forget that. When she empty the trash... ...two cars has passed. She remembered yellow car's driver. -Yeah, that guy! Again? While away, she looked back. Maybe it was just a coincidence. She went back inside and was ready to sleep. She doesn't know that man was returned. She heard noise while sleeping and woke up. A thief? She was out of the bed and was walking towards the balcony. Noise was coming from the opposite house. She saw him while she was peeking through the window. What was he doing? Was he repair old equipment?
-"perhaps he is a repairman", she thought and she went back to bed.

She didn't see him for a while and she has forgotten what happened.
After a few weeks, the man came back. This time, he was interested in other home. It was like preparing to move.
She was waiting for the opportunity to talk to him. But he was working at night or when she was not at home.
One night her best friend Blair, came to visit. She told her foreign man and she said that she was concerned. His behavior was very strange. Blair had an idea.
-You should do some research! She said.
-You should ask if any one knew him in town.
Sharon asked questions to the town. Nobody, didn't know him.
She confused the garbage. Nothing, nothing was.
"Who is this man? Why is he acting strange?" these questions are in her mind now.
One day, when she returned from visiting her family, she saw, the man begin to move. Furnitures were in the garden but he was not there. She thinks, "Maybe I say hello and we will meet"
But, she could not see him.
Her restlessness didn't exceed. She was surveillance the outside from the window from time to time.
- Yeah, there he is!
- I can catch him if I careful.
- The apple pie is very well be an excuse to meet.
She quickly went into the kitchen and began preparations. While she was preparing the pie, she thought; there was a lot of questions that she wants to ask him. She took apple pie and went to visit her new neighbor. She was knock the door. -Hi! Welcome to the new house. I brought the apple pie to you. I love cooking apple pie.

Foreign man was very surprised. The intruder didn't know to shut up.

-I don't like apple pie! He said.
But she didn't listen and quickly entered the house.

Poor man said: "I have a lot of work to do". She still didn't listen.
He was bored. Maybe he could have quickly sent her back . -Hımm, good job!
-Furniture looks expensive!
-What is his job? I gotta ask! She said herself.
- Very nice house. (He didn't say anything.)
- Very nice furniture.
- What is your job?
- You must be a very good one. (He still didn't say anything.)
-Wow! Look at this TV. Can we watch something. Come sit on the couch. I think we are going to be very good friends.

But the man was not the same idea. The questioner neighbor began to baiting.
-Wow! Look at these muscles. Do you love sports?

-I am glad to know you but I have a lot of work and it was late. I gotta get up early morning.
She decided to go without more angry this man. Thay will talk again. Tonight, Sharon realized that he was very worried and perhaps he hide something.
His name. The only thing she learned tonight. His name. David Crowell.
He is very handsome. Very handsome and strange man.
-It was a weird night.
-Sharon is very beautiful woman. Very beautiful and dangerous women.
-I should be very careful against her. He thought.
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#1mensureAug 31, 2009

Hi Everyone! Some parts of the story were missing. I thought, may want to read all of the story, . That's why I wrote again. Thank you very much for your previously comments and votes.        Melinda!\:wub\:

#2spitzmagicSep 1, 2009

Still gets a 5.0. Bravo! I enjoyed just as much as I did the first time....\:rah\: Sharon is just the coolest...

#3maxi kingSep 2, 2009

\:wub\:great story!\:wub\:

#4damnanoirSep 3, 2009

oh oh great story! FIVE!

#5fredbrennySep 20, 2009

Mel the story is just fab! I will read all of the chapters now. 5.0! On to the next chapter...cheeri! Hugs, Fred\:wub\:

#6oldmember_msthickemsSep 27, 2009

this was a "nice" story but a lot of the spelling and sentence structure was off which made it hard for me to really get into the story it confused me a little..but it was okay anyway..
smooches \:\)

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