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The Mallen Legacy
Published May 20, 2010

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Golden97

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Hello Everyone!
Yes, I'm Back. With A Legacy.
I Started A Legacy Called, 'The Start Of Something Beautiful', But I Didn't Know Where To Start With That, but i've got a new legacy and i'm planning to stick to this one!
Sorry For Any Spelling Mistakes.
Enjoy
- Katie

Hello Everyone!
Yes, I'm Back. With A Legacy.
I Started A Legacy Called, 'The Start Of Something Beautiful', But I Didn't Know Where To Start With That, but i've got a new legacy and i'm planning to stick to this one!
Sorry For Any Spelling Mistakes.
Enjoy
- Katie This Is Alex Mallen

His LTW Is To Become A Super Star Athlete. He Is On His Way To His Dream Job, He Is Currently A Rabid Fan, And Is Soon Going To Be Promoted. His Favourites Are: Mac and Cheese, Electronica and Irish Green. His Traits: Athletic, Brave, Family Oriented, Hopless Romantic and Neat.

He Is Married To Becki And Has One Child, Cindy ... This Is Becki Hunter

Her LTW Is To Become A Rock Star. She Is Currently Unemployed As She Wants To Look After Her Daughter Cindy And Has Put Her Musical Career On Hold For Cindy's Todler Years. Her Favourites Are: Sushi, Electrionica and Aqua. Her Traits: Artistic, Family Oriented, Hopless Romantic, Natural Cook and Virtuoso.

She Is Married To Alex And Has One Child, Cindy ... This Is Cindy Mallen-Hunter

She Has Learnt To Talk, But Hasn't Quite Managed To Walk Or Go To The Toilet By Her-Self Yet, (Wont Be Long). Her Favourites Are: Pancakes, Pop and Red. Her Traits: Brave and Virtuoso.

Her Parents Are Alex and Becki, She Hasn't Got Any Sibling ... Yet! Alex Went Outside To Do His Evening Workout.

Alex: *I Hope I Get A Promotion Today, I've Worked So Hard For It .. * *It's Cindy's Birthday Soon, Maybe It's Time For Her To Have A Sibling ... *

(NOTE: * = Thinking! ' = Speaking Outloud) Becki: ' Well Done Cind! Who's My Clever Girl?! '
Cindy: 'Me Mama! Me Me!!'
Becki: 'Good Girl, Time For Bed!'


(Note: She Is Potty Trained I Just Didn't Get A Picture With A Full Bar) Becki: Goodnight Cind!
Alex: Goodnight Sweetie!
Cindy: Goodnight Mama and Dadda. Alex: ' Hey Babe, erm, You Know It's Cindy's Birthday Soon'
Becki: 'Yes'
Alex: 'Well Don't You Think She's Going To Want Someone Around Her Age To Play With?'
Becki: 'Hmm, She Will Wont She ... Okay!!'
Alex: 'Really?'
Becki: ' Yep, I Think I'm Ready For Another One.' Alex: 'I Love You'
Becki: 'I Love You More'

... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Alex: 'Well Done Sweetie! Your Going To Be A Great Musician Like Your Mother!'
Cindy: 'Yeah Dadda! Me Going To Be A Mu-muussi.. I Can't Speak It!' *Pouts*

.. . . . . . . . . . . . .

(Note: I Know I've Put I Cant Speak It, It's A Todler Who's Speaking I Thought It Would make Sense For A Todler to not make sense!) 2 Hours Later

Becki: 'Good Girl, You Can Do It!'

Alex: 'Becki, I've Got To Go To Work' Becki: 'Okay, Good Luck With That Promotion!'
Alex: 'Thank You, Babe.'
Becki: 'Love You'
Alex: 'Love You More! Bye'
Becki: 'Bye'
 Becki: 'YAY!! Well done You cant walk, talk and your potty trained!'
Cindy: 'Me Clever Mamma'
Becki: 'Yes You Are!!'

Becki: *I Think I'm Going To Be Sick* 'Go And Play Now Cinds' Cindy: ' I Wove Playing With blocks!'
 Becki: ' I Think I'm Pregnant'

Cindy: 'MAMMA I'M TIRED'
Becki: 'Just Comming Sweetie' Alex: 'Im Home, And I Got The Promotion!'
Becki: 'Hey, thats great hun'
Alex: ' Are You Okay You Seem Ill'
Becki: 'I'm Pregnant!!'
Alex: 'Thats Wonderful'

............................................................................... A Few Weeks Later

Alex and Cindy Playing Around!

.. Becki: * There's The Proof, Im Pregnant!! * Becki: 'Well, I'm Definatly Pregnant!'
Alex: 'No Doubt About That!'





A Few Hours Later .. Becki and Alex: 'Happy Birthday!'

... ... ... Cindy As A Child

Cindy: 'Wooooo!' Well Thats The End Of The Part One.
Part Two Should Be Out Soon.
Comment on how i could improve this legacy and rate please!

Thank You!
- Katie
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#1spitzmagicMay 22, 2010

Awe what a sweet little family...good start too \:wub\:

#2martoeleMay 22, 2010

So you're back with another legacy. \;\)  The start of this one is much better than the first one. \:D

#3snowangel993May 22, 2010

I love the family, they are cute and I loved how you introduced them!! To make your story better: Your dialogue sims a bit robotic, it doesn't flow as it would in real life. Also maybe put a little description in as well? Like thoughts and feelings, emotions etc :-) just some suggestions, I look forward to the next part!

#4IllandryaMay 25, 2010

A good solid start, Katie, and a very likeable family \:\) I can't wait to find out more about them. Now that Cindy is a child and able to do more things, it would be nice to see them spending more time together as a family and learning more about them.

#5TUTULAJun 3, 2010

Nice start\:wub\:

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