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Castaway - Elly and Adam
Published Nov 4, 2010


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Hi there, my name is Elly Anderson and this guy next to me is Adam Riley. We won a trip on a cruiser last summer but the cruiser sunk in the depth of the ocean.

We landed on this island and live here for about 260 days now.

Hi there, my name is Elly Anderson and this guy next to me is Adam Riley. We won a trip on a cruiser last summer but the cruiser sunk in the depth of the ocean.

We landed on this island and live here for about 260 days now.
This is our living space ... we decorated it a bit so it's more homey. It was merely a matter of time that we became very hungry so Adam learnt to fish in order to serve us some fishy mealsl. He learnt very fast and we had an exotic fish to eat. Myself tried do plant a few exotic onions, peppers and a lot of more plants for a side salad. But Adam proved to be a meal despiser. He never liked my self cooked food. ... maybe he was right. My cooking skills weren't very good and it happened that we became ill of my last meal.

We got of to sleep and slept very long ...
When we woke up some days were gone ... Adam needed a cold shower to get awake again. ... the days in this loneliness are so long and by the way it's raining cats and dogs for some days now ... Luckily the sun came out five days later and suddenly I glimpsed a beautiful butterfly flying over the beach. The beautiful creatur settled down on my finger and when it flew away I wished I could follow .... ... so we decided to get by and accept the inevitable.

So we had to look for something to do. Adam was good in carving and so we got a new game for entertaining ourselves. So Adam planed to built a boat which can bring us back to civilization. Suddenly we heard a big bang and there was a deep hole in the ground next to our nature toilet .... ... and decided to explore the hole. I was frightend .... It was as if the earth has swallowed him up. He was away and I was standing alone on this island. What shall I do on this lonely island? I felt so lonely so the alcohol became my best friend. I drank a lot. Too much and some morning I found myself anywhere with heavy headaches and still more sad than before. And I used to go to this devilish whole every morning. I cried Adams name. Was he dead? Or can he hear my desperate cry? I spend my days alone on this island. Noone around me. Wait! There was a weird sound behind me. What was it? I didn't know there are any wild animals on this island. What a nice surprise. as fast as you can. Or you will be this animals meal tonight. and I decided to cook a sedative soup. This would help me to sleep quiet this night. .... some distance away there was somebody crawling out of the hole. ... and he had a big surprise with him. Not only the smelling body. and Elly couldn't believe her eyes. She never thought she would see Adam again. So happy ... they felt butterflies in their tummies. ... he would never be such a jerk again and leave Elly alone. .... there is still a surprise for you. Oh no, two surprises. Come with me! Yeah believe it or not. Oh baby you don't have to swooning. There is another surprise for you! When I fell into the hole I stayed there some days until I decided to look for an exit. Then I saw a light. A small light far away. I walked and finally run to this light and when I came to the exit I saw ... well that's another surprise. Pack your bags and follow me baby! Trust me that's the way back home! This will be another long journey. we reached the light. We looked very dirty and tousled but we were back in civilization. ... to see some harmless animals. Oh they were so cute, I just wanted to cuddle them. Hidden behind some bushes he showed me an ufo. We didn't know where this came from but we had the opportunity to leave this meadow and look for some people.

BUT first of all we had to clean each other.
So I left the roes behind and gave myself a dressing-down. we started the ufo and flew back to the future.... no wait that was the movie I saw some years ago ... we flew back to civilization! .... we could see some houses and clotheslines. Oh yeah :) ... to change this coonut bra into some more civilized clothes. It was a wonderful feeling to see all these people walking to this cute little town. We decided to stay together, to look for an apartment and ... a cute little apartment for Elly and Adam. What a happy end. Who would have guessed that some months before. I hope you liked my story! Greetings from Jana!
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#5jarletNov 7, 2010

Very enjoyable and entertaining story with great shots! \:rah\:  I had a good time reading it \:D  and i hope you write more lovely stories on this site!good job! \:cool\:

#6MangioNov 8, 2010

What an interesting throughly entertaining story \:rah\: The pictures looked amazing and it was nicely written too \;\)

#7martoeleNov 8, 2010

Very nice story. Hope you will write more stories! \:\)

#8Nygirl08Nov 10, 2010

This story was simple adorable!

#9clairepitts1994Nov 21, 2010

Great story, your screenshots were lovely! I hope you continue to write more stories here! \:D 5!

#10Kayla_MarieJan 7, 2011

very nice story!

#11LovehasitJan 13, 2011

That was such an amazing story, I loved it thanks for sharing! (2 thumbs up!)

#12linasometimesVIPFeb 15, 2011

Cute story, hope to see another one soon \:wub\:

#13helda12345Feb 25, 2011

Once I started reading I couldn't stop \:wub\: Thanks for writing such a cool story! ^ _ ^

#14SWiMSiMMay 12, 2011

This is a really good story!! great pictures!! i hope i will see more storys from you! \:wub\:

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