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A Day in Wonderland - Part 3
Published Mar 23, 2011


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At long last, MurfeeL's epic saga, A Day in Wonderland, returns, with Part Three! Featuring: all-new characters, climactic episodes and chilling prose that will have you on the edge of your seats and clicking that mouse into submission for more!

At long last, MurfeeL's epic saga, A Day in Wonderland, returns, with Part Three! Featuring: all-new characters, climactic episodes and chilling prose that will have you on the edge of your seats and clicking that mouse into submission for more! In parts One and Two of A Day in Wonderland, what started off as a quaint morning tea party at the home of the Madd Hatter quickly took a turn for the worse. The Hatter's android, Alice A-Teen65, vehemently refused to serve the guests. The Hatter, determined to upgrade his robot, failed to realize that his daughter Sophie Hatter had stolen the tarts of his lady friend, Iracebeth Hearts. Amidst all of this chaos, Iracebeth's sister, Mirana Diamonds, was attacked by a white rabbit plushie come to life! But The Hatter's bad day had only just begun.... In a sudden twist of fate, The Madd Hatter learned that his own stuffed animal, a cat, had been possessed by none other than the ghostly spectre in fuchsia, the Cheshire Cat! This restless shade had returned from the netherworld to inform The Hatter that for his own unspeakable crimes he was being called to justice, and with his android Alice he was ordered to appear at Mushroom Rock Road Park on Frabjous Day to be sentenced! Meanwhile, Alice was beside herself with grief after trying to make peace with her master, The Hatter, and failing. Seeking a quite, remote place to leak her battery acid, she made a blind dash into the hedge maze to cry in peace. But she was unaware that she had an audience, for none other than the White Rabbit, formerly busy digging a huge hole in the yard, was watching! With no time to be surprised or even scared, Alice heard voices behind her, and recognized them immediately, as the irascible Iracebeth was hot on the terrified Hatter's trail as he searched the grounds for Alice to tell her the harrowing news. Furious that she was not being paid any attention to whatsoever, Iracebeth demanded more tarts to replace the ones The Hatter's daughter Sophie had eaten. Ignoring them both, the White Rabbit beckoned for Alice to follow him into the hole. Wildly curious, she approached the yawning chasm, never hearing her master call her name. Alice was blanketed by darkness and engulfed in cold. She ran on water and swam in the airless void between time and space. But there was a faint glimmer of light -- a star, a flashlight, or maybe just the white tuft of the Rabbit's fuzzy tail. It didn't matter--it was all that she could perceive in the abnormal gloom, and so Alice followed it, too excited to turn back around. She emerged on the other side, but it was not light she encountered on the banks of sudden reality, but smoke. Lots of it. Almost blinded in the dark haze, she looked about her, barely making out the sounds of running water and the rustle of leaves on an evening breeze. Was she still at The Hatter's House? She didn't think so. It probably wasn't Kansas, either. Before Alice could turn the homing device on her GPS on, she was startled by a hollow, rolling voice that wafted to her through the cloudy smog: 'Whoooo.....arrrre....yooooouuuuuu....?' Meanwhile, The Madd Hatter had angrily followed Alice into the hole, never even noticing the White Rabbit, as all he could see was red....and all he could hear was the endless ranting of Iracebeth, who--of course--followed. They came out of the black tunnel and found themselves in a quiet, gated parking lot they had never been yo before. All was still as night fell, though the day had still been young when they entered the hole. 'Welcome to Mushroom Rock Road Park,' the voice of the loathed Cheshire Cat called to them from the entrance. Materializing slowly, as if he hadn't a care and all the time in the world, the Cat from Cheshire grinned at the couple who approached the gate with angry strides. What joke is this, ghost? The Hatter demanded? If you want to call you impending doom a joke, by all means, let us laugh and laugh merrily on this joyous, laughter-filled Frabjous Day! Ha ha haaa! Your trial will begin shortly before Alice's, so I do hope she laughs as well. Ah! And I see you have brought a witness to testify on your behalf! How delightful! The Hatter was near screaming. What trial, blast your striped hide! Who is the plaintiff, if I am to be the defendant!? Stand him here before me, or go back to the abysmal litter box from whence you came, PUSS! The hair on Cheshire Cat's sharply arched back rose, and he visibly shook. Who is the plaintiff!? WHO!? You Madd, bad and dangerous to know cartoon character! Why, it is your own BEST FRIEND whom you have sullied with your indifference! The other mad one at the original tea party--why, hes crazier than you, how could YOU forget to invite him to your get-together this morning!? WHO!? The very one this month is named after: The MARCH HARE!!!! Oh! What hath thou DONE, poor Hatter!? What horrible calamities are destined to befall you on this inauspicious Frabjous Day!? Will justice prevail? Will MurfeeL ever make an appointment with that psychiatrist her friends recommended!? Stay tuned and find out!

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#1RatRaceRobMar 24, 2011

Loads of fun here... love that huge rabbit hole LOL :P... the character designs are as curious and cool as the story --welcome back, Mad Murfeel \:D \:rah\:

#2Yuk25Mar 24, 2011

Very nice pic!

#3sara_ashleyMar 24, 2011

yeah it is back and the story is very cool by the way welcome back Murfee \:D \:rah\:

#4murfeelMar 24, 2011

I am so sorry to have everyone wait so long! \:D It is GREAT to be back! \:wub\: I actually lost ALL of my Alice in Wonderland creations--every character and every lot! \:eek\: --and I spent this entire month recreating everything from scratch! \:Duh: I am just SO relieved that I managed to finish the entire story before March ended! \:rah\: I hope everyone continues to read this ridiculous story and gets a real kick out of it--thanks so much for the support! \:wub\:

#5sara_ashleyMar 24, 2011

ooh what happen for yours creations of Alice in Wonderland ?? anyway yeah i'll be glad to read this very funny story \;\) !!! and you have all my support \:wub\:

#6martoeleMar 25, 2011

Congrats for having had this story featured. Welcome back and I hope that we don't have to wait so long for the next chapter to come. \:\)

#7MangioMar 26, 2011

Congrats on the feature, murfeel \:wub\: Glad you were able to continue and didn't lose anything \;\) So exciting.. off to fall down the hole with Alice \:D

#8ByzantineGirlMar 29, 2011

I'm back on those mushrooms again.:P  \:wub\: Wow, I'm loving your story and adding the March Hare - a stroke of brilliance!!  The pictures are way cool and I do love those HUGE colourful mushies. lmao - love the teeth you've given the March Hare too. \:D On to the next installment now, lovin' it, Steph \:D

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