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A Day in Wonderland - Part 4
Published Mar 24, 2011


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murfeel

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Part Four of the magnificent Wonderland series begins!

Part Four of the magnificent Wonderland series begins! Last time in MurfeeL's A Day in Wonderland, the magnificent narrator and Illustrious Author Murfee Lee told of the dire misfortunes of the main characters, the Madd Hatter, and the android Alice A-Teen65. While The Hatter was being told that his ex-best friend, the March Hare, was incredibly upset with him for failing to invite him to morning tea, Alice found herself lost in a smoke-filled park. Out of the dark came a single inquiry to the gynoid: Who Are You? The smoke was really thick and bittersweet. Alice looked all round her at the flowers and the blades of grass, but she did not see anything that looked like the right place to go under the circumstances--so she just followed the road beneath her feet! There were large mushrooms growing near her, about the same height as herself, but with her night vision eyes turned on she was able to detect the source of the smoke and follow it to a little patch away from the tables piled high with decks of cards and chess boards, and in the wirds of the wise, it occurred to her that she might as well look and see what was at the end of the patch!

Alice's eyes immediately met those of a large blue caterpillar! Quietly smoking a long hookah (smoking is BAD for you, boys and girls!), it took not the smallest notice of her or of anything else--because it was just a park bench made over at the Russian CC site Helen Sims 3 that was the only caterpillar-related CC MurfeeL could find and had to make do with--laugh and she'll haunt you in your sleep! Again came the question: Who are You? Alice scoffed. Who am I? I’m Alice—who are YOU? Alice? The caterpillar scoffed in return. Not hardly. You are but a machine, a copy, a mock-up of the REAL Alice—a little girl lost to the Hatter; she was taken from him, prematurely. You are just her replacement, and replacements have no right to reply to their placement as you have yours! What are you talking about, you infant version of a butterfly!? I AM Alice, the robot declared hotly. No, you are NOT, said the caterpillar with a decisive puff on his hookah. What the—am I lost in a parallel dimension here!? Hello! I’ve got the dress, the shoes—check out the cute little headband! I’m the best Alice MurfeeL could possibly make—give people a little credit! The caterpillar stood on his multitude of rear legs. YOU are a robot servant, and your crimes are unforgivable! I received an email from the Madd Hatter a few hours ago, requesting a replacement's replacement for a new android model. Show yourself, new Alice! A figure emerged from the smoke as if she were Walking on Air, and came to stand before the aghast Alice A-Teen65. Why--it was none other than KERLI KOIV, the famous Bubble-Goth ventriloquist doll! The caterpillar showed her with pride. With but a word, he said, he could easily turn Alice off, and put Kerli in her place. Their fates would depend entirely on how the Hatter's own trial on the other side of the park fared. If found guilty, both he and Alice would be made to pay the ultimate price. If not, and mercy is shown to him, mercy would be shown to her. The Madd Hatter would very much like a replacement, his email said. But would Alice!?
Will Kerli Koiv take Alice's place as the treasured servant in his household!? Will The Hatter be found innocent of all charges by the March Hare? When will the insanity ever end--keep posted and all shall be revealed!

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#1RatRaceRobMar 25, 2011

Lol... poor Alice A-Teen65... and rofl, the made-over park bench caterpillar... guess I'm gonna be haunted in my sleep \;\) :P

#2MangioMar 26, 2011

Poor Alice .. another exciting addition \:rah\: I was laughing all the way through, loved the pictures in the garden.. so wonderfully done \;\) Can't wait for more \:wub\:

#3ByzantineGirlMar 29, 2011

\:rah\: Brilliant!!!!  Love the caterpillar, I'd like to think that it was his smoking of the hookah that sometimes made him *feel* like he was a park bench. \;\) I absolutely adore part 6,\:wub\: the garden is so out there and gorgeous and Alice looks so small and lost - no she's a lovely looking robot, looking so sweet and I don't want to see Kerli Koiv stepping into her little shoes. \:o I think the Hatter would prefer Kerli for reasons we'll not go into, but I don't want it to happen so I'm going to the next installment.... see ya! Steph\:D

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