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Camp Paradiso! CHAPTER 7!
Published Oct 8, 2013


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CheeseYEAHSims

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Okay, hey guys putting up chapter 7 now, dunno if it's a bit late but anyway hope you enjoy got some drama's and all so hope you really like this I try my best! :)

Okay, hey guys putting up chapter 7 now, dunno if it's a bit late but anyway hope you enjoy got some drama's and all so hope you really like this I try my best! :) After Rosemary left although we were upset life was pretty good, I mean no disasters? That's good right? Maddie and Josh were planning the wedding and I well, the bridesmade dresses are blue so thinking of dying my hair blue! But yeah not really up for it. But anyway.. The next day was Josh's bachelor party and us girls decided we'd just go out and have some fun and talk while you know they got ready and they were all excited. So I drove us all too a little cafe down the road. We arrived and we all sat down Maddie looked nervous and no one was talking I decided I guess I had to say something

"Maddie, are you alright, you look down and that's not good your wedding is soon? I thought you would be happy and excited!"
I said.

Maddie replied still the same look on her face "Of course I am it's just, my parents they want me to marry a doctor, lawyer someone rich and famous probably there expectations are so high I've told them I'm getting married but not to Josh,"

Emma then spoke up "OMG! Your parents don't know who your marrying you must tell them, come on! They will understand if they see how happy he makes you!"

"Yeah come on please, your parents need to know!" cried Mia.
The lady serving tables looked at us well Mia, the loud one..

"MIA! Shhh.." I said

She did with a scared look on her face then Maddie spoke again "They won't like Josh I know it he's perfect but he's not rich and they want rich!"

"His last name is "Rich"ard so I would say he's a Richard like me" said Emma

I couldn't help but laugh "He's your brother Emma would he be hurt if I hadn't told my parents about him?" said Maddie

"He'd might be upset you never told him," said Emma
After the cafe talk we decided to go to the pool and Maddie rang up her parents she said

Maddie: Look mum, dad Josh is who I'm marrying, no he's not rich well his name is Richard but anywho! I don't care what you say he's my love and he's perfect to me!

Parents: Not rich, no good job? Pathetic!

Maddie hang up she was quite upset and worried that maybe they wouldn't come to the wedding but she tried to stay positive.
We then headed to the movies for the night, so we wouldn't interupt the boys and so we could take Maddie's mind off her parents. The boys had a quick bite of pizza and headed off to have the most fun of there lives, well hopefully haha! And the night was going so well it was a blast, and Josh felt free, happy. He was with all his friends and he was about to get married to the most beautiful woman in the world, to him! But then she showed up. A pink limo all of a sudden pulled up at the party looked like someone famous but no. They all stared it was her. A few years back there was a girl named Joanne she hated Caleb, there was no direct reason and many never knew people say it was his family members. She walked up to Caleb.

"You, I knew I'd find you once again you little oh well, it be too rude for me to say what your really are, still a fat single pringle I presume?"

"Stop talking about yourself, because I have a beautiful girlfriend named Rose are and umm you really want to go there you no necked selfless person! YOU RUINED EVERY RELATIONSHIP WITH A GIRL OR A FRIEND I EVER HAD YOU TOLD MY FAMILY MEMBERS TERRIBLE THINGS ABOUT ME AND YOU WERE THE ONE WHO RUINED EVERYTHING AND YOU KNOW THAT MY HEART PROBLEM WORSENED BECAUSE OF THAT PRANK YOU PULLED AND YOU DON'T CARE!"

Joanne's eyes became devious as she looked into Caleb's eyes her devious smile spread across her face.
A fight broke out. Caleb was not ready. Terror oh it was terrifying! Josh and Hayden tried to help! Caleb grabbed Joanne but she was strong, and Caleb had lack of sleep and wasn't quite as strong as his normal self. The fight was nearing and end and Josh was screaming out trying to help and Hayden was in shock. Caleb was now on the ground unconctious everyone was staring at Joanne and she had that devious smile still spread across her face as she walked out of the disaster. Hayden in shock grabbed out his phone and quickly dialled Rose

Hayden: "ROSE! ROSE!

Rose: Hayden is everything okay speak slowly??

Hayden: JOANNE! SHE CAME BACK CALEB IS ON THE FLOOR UNCONCIOUS AND JOSH IS TAKING HIM TO THE HOSPITAL NOW!

Hayden had tears rolling down his cheeks as he was telling the horrible news.
A huge pang of pain entered my heart I almost dropped the phone in shock and disbelief I knew I had to stay calm I put the phone back to my ear.

Rose: "WHY! BUT WHY, WHY WAS SHE THERE!" Tears poured down my face and I couldn't keep calm or anything I was ripped in my heart.

Hayden: Rose I'm so sorry, I.. I.."

Hayden could barley speak.
Rose: But will he make it! Please Hayden just tell me he will be alright.

Hayden: I can't.. They said it was quite severe.. I.. I

Then it happened Rose dropped the phone and fell to her knee's in tears she couldn't do it, it was too difficult she knew she had to go stay by his bed for possibly his last hours!
Thank you guys so much for reading! Hope you liked it next chapter will be here soon! So excited about it! Anyway Caleb :( I know upsetting. And yeah but remember rate and comment :)

-CheeseYEAHSims

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#1NisukiOct 10, 2013

Oh my gosh, and Caleb's heart ... fight.. no.. JOANNA GO TO HELL! \:mad\: WAITING for the next chapter! T__T Please save Caleb.

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