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Simple Life [chapter 1]
Published Nov 13, 2007


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.:: Simple Life ::.
chapter 1

First I want to thank you all for your positive feedback :) It brings me a motivation for work and of course a big smile on my face :) Thank you once again ;)

.:: Simple Life ::.
chapter 1

First I want to thank you all for your positive feedback :) It brings me a motivation for work and of course a big smile on my face :) Thank you once again ;)
[Few weeks later]
Riiing riiing
"Who can call so early in the morning?" thought Melody. - I'll get it, you can sleep.
- Unfortunalety I can't. I need to prepare myself to work.
- Mom? Oh, hi... No, we didn't sleep. A haidresser? Why not... Ok, so see you at 10! Bye. - Who was that darling? - asked Mike.
- My mom. She wants us to go to the hairdresser.
- But you know that I love your hair.
- You know... sometimes a woman needs some changes.
- If you think so...
"What should I do with you? Well... maybe cut off and... change a colour? We'll see." thought Melody and felt very strange. "Oh no, not again. I need to see the doctor. I don't know why I have so bad headaches. And always in the mornings. I am only hoping that this isn't anything bad." - So, what do you want to do with your hair?
- Wel... I'm not quite sure. Maybe you can suggest me something interesting?
- I think that you must cut it... but don't worry, I will make you a beauty young lady!
[3 hours later]
- And what do you think?
- Incredible! I look great! Thank you so much! Mom, and what do you think?
- Well... It?s ok.
- And that's all?
- I don't think that black is your color.
- But I like it.
- I must go now, mom. I'll call you later, okay?
- But why? I thought that we can drink some coffee.
- Maybe next time. I called the doctor and I must go today.
- Doctor? Is everything allright, sweetheart?
- I'm not sure and that's the reason why I must go.
- But please, call me when you will know anything.
[The next day]
"My results... I'm so frightened what it could be. I'm only hoping it isn't anything bad... any disease. I don't want to worry Mike or mom."
- Doctor Simons? It's Melody Collins. I want to talk with you about my results. I think they're wrong.
- It's impossible that they're wrong. We repeated them three times.
- But I was so careful...
- I tell you something, miss Collins. It isn't a world's end.
"But I'm too young for this" Melody thought.
When Mike back from work Melody was already prepared. She didn't know he will react, but she couldn't hide it from him.
- Melody... is everything alright? You don't look very well...
- Please dit down. We need to talk.
- But is everything ok?
-Look... I was at doctor yesterday.
Mike was confused - You didn't tell me that you felt sick! Why?
- Because I didn't want to worried you.
- We are married. I am here for you.
- I know. What I am trying to say is... that I'm pregnant.
- You are... PREGNANT? - Honey it's fantastic news! Oh, I love you so much!
- I love you to!
They hugged and kissed for hours. And, especially, they talked about baby. Their first baby. Is is boy or girl, about it's name, shape of her or his nose... everything. They were so excited. They are starting a real family. But they don't forget about their responsibility for this baby.
Melody was so excited - I am so happy that we are going to have our first baby!
- Me too! We must call to your mom and say her this wonderful news!
- Of course...
- We have got so much to do before baby will arrive. For example we need to paint baby's room and buy some furniture and toys... - Well, I already have some idea.
- Yes? So tell me.
- It will be a surprise. When you will back tomorrow from work you will see.
- Already tomorow? Honey, I don't think it's a good idea...
- Don't worry. Walls are already painted; I don't want to change their colour. Maybe I just place some sticks.
- But what about furniture?
- WHen I was at hairdresser I saw a wonderful shop with stuff for babies. If you want it, we can go there after your work. What you think about it?
- Great idea!
[Three months later]
"Oh no, I'm getting so much...bigger! I heard that it happens to all pregnant ladies, but I don't know how Mike will react when he see me... But, hey-I'm stupid! He loves me no matter how do I look, so why I am worring? Did I heard someone's calling me?"
Indeed. It was Mike. - Honey! It's me! Come here, quickly... I have some wonderful news!
- You will never belive what happend to me...
- Please, tell me!
- I got promoted!
- No way! Really? Oh, I'm so proud of you, Mike!
Mike smiled to his wife. - I have another wonderful news. Don't you think that we should buy a new house? I was in bank and they told me that now we can afford for new, bigger house!
- Oh, this is the happiest day in my life! - Melody couldn't belive her ears. A baby. Mike got promoted. And now a new house. Their dreams are coming true!

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#271ayotola1Nov 20, 2007

LOVE IT -the whole deal, graphics, story play- 5.0

\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

#28keara1995Nov 20, 2007

awsome\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

#29Nov 22, 2007

\:\) \:D \:P I love this!

#30jaundyce61Nov 22, 2007

Nicely done, I quite enjoyed this~~\:rah\:

#31hiedibear75Nov 23, 2007

\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: Loved it!\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: Can't wait to see what they have......a boy or a girl or both.\;\)\:cool\: I kinda thought she looked better as a blond.......but what did Mike think of Melody's new hair.\:confused\: She is still very pretty though.\;\)\:wub\:

#32Nono_GirlNov 29, 2007

It's a very good story! very cute...I think she looked better blonde but I;m sure it has something to do with the baby...plus the guy is suuuper cute\:D

#33ana_mexicaliNov 30, 2007

good \:\)

#34cptnemo6Jan 25, 2008

Wonderfull story!! \:cool\:

#35qasertFeb 15, 2008

\:wub\:

#36Mr. ChedderAug 1, 2008

That is so good and interesting. I am also a good story teller maybe you can start making some furniture for all your great downloaders. \:rah\:

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