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A Beautiful Dis-As-Ter;Intro;Welcome To My Life
Published Feb 19, 2008


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BoodaMae

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Welocome to A Beautiful Dis-As-Ter! This is the intro, and I'll be introducing the characters. Please comment and rate, I don't mind constructive critism! Thanks, now read on!---->

Welocome to A Beautiful Dis-As-Ter! This is the intro, and I'll be introducing the characters. Please comment and rate, I don't mind constructive critism! Thanks, now read on!----> This is the Nestle family. It is mad up of the twins, and their mother. Valeri and Vanessa are the twins. Valeri is on the right, radiant, the sun hitting her face just right. Vanessa, beautiful in her own way, is on the left. And in the front is DeAndra. As most twins are, Valeri and Vanessa are pretty much opposites, though they are both beautful. Valeri is extremly beautiful. She has the perfect body type, and her personality is bubbly. She is considered the "pretty" twin. Though you may think she is mean, she's actually nice. She has lots of friends, but she considers her "bestie" to be her sister, Vanessa. She hates all the attention she gets from being the beautiful twin, it agitates her. This is Vanessa. She is a little chunky, but no one really notices. Her personality is great, and she also agrees that her and her sister are inspereable. Singing is a passion, and she hopes one day to be a singer. She has plenty of friends, as she doesn't wallow in self-pity about her weight. And now is their mother, DeAndra. She herself is attractive and smart. The death of her first husband leaves her scared, lonely, and restless. She does what she has to in order to provide for her daughters. That includes "exotic dancing." Yes, she dances for a living, however, one day she hopes to find a better job. Will she ever be able to settle down with out having to dance, or will her hopes be smashed with a dash of reality? Well, that's it for now! In the next chapter, the story will begin, and there will be diolaugue. Sorry for any grammar mistakes too! Tell me what you think!
[I finally got my pictures clear too!]
XoXo Sarah

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#1BoodaMaeFeb 19, 2008

Whew...it took so long to find out how to get my pics. clear, but I got it!\:wub\:

#2misha1013Feb 20, 2008

nice beginning\:rah\:

#3spicyloveFeb 20, 2008

very nice\;\)

#4aaaaaaacFeb 21, 2008

NICE!\:\) \:rah\:

#5ksinclair878Feb 21, 2008

Great introduction, I'm intrigued. I can't wait for the next part.

#6Sxylady_1978Feb 22, 2008

nice start \:rah\:

#7civetinjaMar 26, 2008

Thanks !\:\)

#8rssheehyDec 17, 2008

\:rah\: great start

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