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Why Did You Come Back? Intro
Published Mar 1, 2008


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BoodaMae

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Ok, here goes another try at a story. I still can't figure out how to use Decogal's Modeling Pose.....[HELP?!] Well, read on! Please don't forget to rate, and I don't mind constructive criticism! :] ------------------------------>

Ok, here goes another try at a story. I still can't figure out how to use Decogal's Modeling Pose.....[HELP?!] Well, read on! Please don't forget to rate, and I don't mind constructive criticism! :] ------------------------------> I remember the day clearly, the day they came. It was quiet, and I'd been playing. I remember that I was about to destroy the house with the rocket when the doorbell rang. I patiently waited to hear the sound of my mother's footsteps walking towards the door. It took her a moment, but mom set her cooking book down and got up. I heard her dust of her dress, then calmly walk to the door. Instead of opening the door immediately, like she usually does, it was dead silent for a few moments. The two on the other side of the door waited, and I'm sure their hearts were racing, awaiting the approval of mother. My mom was always one of those fancy women, but she also never cared what people thought. But today was different. I tiptoed out of my room, and I saw my mother's eyes get wet. She cleared her throat, and I knew this would be a day to remember. She wiped her eyes quickly and swiftly, then opened the door and motioned the two strangers in. I saw the little boy, about my age, sit on the couch, immediately making himself at home. I chuckled slightly, thinking about what I'd do if I was in his position. Propbably the same thing. The woman and my mother started talking, the woman engaging herself in conversation.
"Wow KayLen, your dress is beautiful. How have you been?" The woman asked sheepishly, careful to look mother in the eyes. I wondered and thought contently on who these mysterious people were, and where they came from.
"Lacey, try not to butter me up too much, I want to know who that is. Now."
"He's uhh...Lucas!" She said, and I remember her eyes filling with regret for the sarcastic comment inflicted on my mother.
"Oh Lacey, please tell me he's not you son! What have you been doing?! I already have ONE of your mistakes!"
The Lacey girl bowed her head in defeat, then told the Lucas boy t go away, and my mom directed him to my room. By then, I had already started playing with my dollhouse again, trying to look innocent.
He stared at me for a moment, before I even looked at him, I knew he'd be cute. Why, I honestly don't know, but his presence in my room felt mighty. I blushed quickly, putting aside my stupid thoughts. Why should I care if he was cute or not, nobody found me beautiful, and if they did, I was too shy to thank them for noticing it.
"Wanna play pattycake?" I asked him without looking up.
"Sure!" he said and sat down next to me. I put my spaceship up and turned toward him. That was when my heart melted.
This boy had the prettiest eye's I'd ever seen. Hazel, almost, with a hint of brown.
"So, what's your name?" He asked with a big smile.
I blushed, and looked away. "Amber, and yours?"
"Lucas."
And we sat there, playing pattycake, but without the words.
And as corny as it sounds, I knew, that I would make this boy mine. He was so cute, and I knew I'd change. I'd change for him, because I wanted him to like me. I wanted him to think I was cute. I wanted him to be my boyfriend.
"Listen Lacey, I want us to be friends, I do, but you know what happend last time." Mom said, and Lucas and I were confused, probably because we'd just started eavesdropping.
"We don't have to be friends, all I want to do is leave him here. We have nothing, and I need you right now. That's the least you can do. And I know you have money." She said defendatly.
"I don't owe you anything!" Mom said angrly.
Lacey looked down, regretting hwat she'd said I bet.
"Lacey I love you, and not because I'm supposed to. You're strong, and beautiful, but I really don't owe you anything! I just want to ask you this question. And answer honestly. Then I'll give you money and you can leave." Mom said desperately.
Lucas and I looked at each other sadly. We both understood, Lucas would be leaving today, and I'd probably never see him again.
"Where were you all those years? And why did you come back after so long?" My mom looked contently into the woman's eyes, and I knew right then that Lacey was hiding something from my mom.
Well, that's it for the intro, thanks for reading!
*&!What is Lacey hiding?!&*
*&!Will Amber and Lucas ever see each other again?!&*
:] Seeya in Part 1;Secrets! :]

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#7Mar 2, 2008

woah that was pretty intense! wait, what did the mom mean when she said "i was already left with one of your mistakes"? Is Amber Lacey's daughter? OMG if she is, Lucas is her brother, or half brother! I hope not! good story though\:wub\:

#8varrnasMar 2, 2008

I am confused on whether or not Amber is Lucas's sister? yikes I hope she's not, thats weird lol I like the story thought....

#9donaldchMar 3, 2008

\:cool\:

#10happyb8888Mar 3, 2008

Wow! Can't wait to find out what happens! \:\)

#11OpheliaNivalMar 3, 2008

Nice story, as the others here I also wonder about the whole brother/sister thing, great twist! You certainly got me interested with your cryptic and mysterious writing... Keep up with the good work!

#12spacemouseMar 5, 2008

Good story. I loved it! \:\)

#13spacemouseMar 5, 2008

Oops.. forgot to rate! \:\(

#14inesia17Mar 5, 2008

Nice story!\:D

#15mako007Mar 7, 2008

nice start

#16civetinjaApr 4, 2008

Thanks for sharing !\:\)

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