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The Deceit
Published Feb 28, 2015


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Drøm

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Hello! This is my first story here, and I hope you‘ll enjoy it . It‘s probably going to be only several chapters long, but we‘ll see. It‘s got drama, romance and a little mystery.
Credit to all Custom Content creators for being so awesome and sharing their work! Without you, sims wouldn't be as fun ;)

Now let‘s begin the introduction!

Hello! This is my first story here, and I hope you‘ll enjoy it . It‘s probably going to be only several chapters long, but we‘ll see. It‘s got drama, romance and a little mystery.
Credit to all Custom Content creators for being so awesome and sharing their work! Without you, sims wouldn't be as fun ;)

Now let‘s begin the introduction!

Morena Ross works as a computer repair technician, she‘s 25 years old and is a bit of a gamer. Basically her one true love is her computer, which is the most expensive thing she owns. Morena would rather spend her money on a new game or a book than food, and sometimes it worries her. She knows she‘s smart, and uses it to her own advantage, but being a successful adult is something she’s yet to achieve. To be fair, she has no idea what counts as a successful adult. Her parents argue she isn't one, though most of the time she feels happy (or hungry) with the way she lives.
Violet Ximena Omero is Morena's roommate. She’s 24 years old and works as a hairdresser. The saloon she works in is close to Morena's work. They met when Violet came to the Computer Service and tried to persuade Morena to fix her laptop for free. In the end she offered a small rent for the empty room in her apartment in exchange.

Violet barely has any clients, but she does have one very loyal and rich – Danna Summers. They happen to get along well, Danna often helps out by bringing her friends to the saloon.
The girls rarely talk at their apartment, but Violet does come at the Computer Service when she has a free hour. Morena isn't very happy about it, since she finds her roommate annoying. Especially when Violet eats her yogurt and never buys it back. Violet’s apartment is terribly small, so Morena usually stays in her even smaller room to avoid her, while Violet enjoys annoying her roommate and always does it on purpose. She knows that as crappy as the apartment is Morena wouldn't get anything better for the same price. One day a strange man came to the Computer Service… He said his name was Ezra Murray. His voice was deep and rusty, something about him felt oddly familiar to Morena, but she couldn't tell why. The man came for what everyone came here – to get his computer fixed. He didn't know what was wrong with it, he just said it wasn't working properly. While Morena was filling a service form, Violet came for her usual visit. The man greeted her with utmost politeness catching her attention. Morena observed their interaction and rolled her eyes. Violet is so predictable, she thought. “I trust you with a possession of mine,” Mr. Murray said with eyes fixed on Morena. “I’m sure it will be in good hands.”

For a moment Morena felt as if hypnotized by his confident voice, she blinked a few times trying to get out of this weird state. “Of course.” She said.

“Would you be so kind and tell me how much it may cost to repair it?” He asked.

“Well, since we don’t know what’s wrong with it, it’s quite hard to predict–“

“Oh, I could help with that. Would you be interested in a free palm reading? I could predict all about what future has for you, Miss Morena.”
Morena stared at him in disbelief, but the man continued with confidence. “The knowledge of the future is priceless, I have yet to be wrong about such things. I could tell you all that you desire to know. And for such a little favor in exchange.”

….

To be continued
So here goes the introduction. I’d love to read your opinion, feedback is necessary for improvement ^^.
Soon, we should learn what happens next, how Morena will deal with this strange man as she calls him...

Have a nice weekend!

Elia


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#1behemoth_blueFeb 28, 2015

This looks interesting. Nice introduction.\:rah\:
I love mysteries so I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes and who the strange dude is. \:\)
Looking forward to the next chapter!

#2taj39759VIPMar 1, 2015

haven't done the sims 4 yet... how did you do it! mine won't load.

#3AlessaFayeMar 3, 2015

Agreed. I love mysteries so I'm liking this story so far! \:\)

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