Who is this stranger?-Part 4
Published Sep 2, 2009

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Hi Everyone! Are you ready for the fourth part of the story?
At the end of the third part David had invited Sharon to dinner. What do you think? What will Sharon do? Come on let's learn together.

Hi Everyone! Are you ready for the fourth part of the story?
At the end of the third part David had invited Sharon to dinner. What do you think? What will Sharon do? Come on let's learn together.
- Okay. Just a dinner. Sharon said.
- Tomorrow evening, at seven, I'll take you. Said David and went away.
The next day, she call the office and said that she'll a little late.
She went straight to the shopping. Last week, she had found a black dress at "Elegant Fashion". She thought "It is perfect for dinner."
When she return to the office, she learn that chef is waiting for her. She went to his room. He seemed quite serious.
- You are to inquire about David Crowell. Stop the investigation!, he said.
- Blair and I think he was planning a robbery. I Just trying to gather some information. He invited me to dinner this evening. I think, I can learn something. He is very strange man. He has an ex-girlfriend Sandy, of course. I followed them up to the abandoned factory. There were around precious stones. At Sandy's home ......
- Enough Sharon!, he shouted. I said, leave in advance of this job!
- Ok, chef.
That evening, Sharon was beautiful than ever. David felt his heart would stop. Sharon said okay to chef but she could learn something to dinner and asked:
- Are you satisfied with your job at the museum? Don't you worry about the robbery?
- This evening, I don't want to talk from work, Sharon. I want to talk about you and me!
During dinner, they told each other, they like and they don't like, their childhood and families. They learned that, both of them were dying to go on a world tour. They contract to go to together. It was incredibly beautiful night. - It was a great night. Thank you for coming. Said David.
- I had a very good time and I thank you. Said Sharon. Now, she had not bad thoughts about him.
- Are we out to dinner again? Maybe a romantic dinner or a concert...?
Sharon smiled.
- Maybe, she said. She waited a little kiss.
David hugged her and thanked again.
"A hug would be nice also." Sharon thought.
David told to Sharon to wait and then went to take the car. While she is waiting, she heard some sound. Suddenly she felt a sharp pain behind her head. When David came back, he didn't find her. He walked around, looked at the shops. He walked up to the beach. Sharon was not in any place. Suddenly the phone rang. David recognized the voice on the phone. Sandy!
- Sharon with us. Immediately come here.
- Did you miss her? This was not in the plan.
- Don't talk too much David. She will stay with us until job done. That's all. Just come here.
Everything became worse. David, went to the police. He should tell everything. There was no other choice.
- I am detective David Crowell from Sunset City Police Department. I'm undercover.
- Yes. I know who you are. I did research on your right. Yesterday, I talked with your head. I have information about your task. How can I help you?
- I think criminals are disturbing Sharon's curious behavior. They had missed her. They call me a little bit ago. They are waiting me. Do they suspect me, I do not know. We must catch them this evening. We can't wait!
- Yes you are right. We must act immediately.
- I have been home a short time. We will meet at the abandoned factory.
"Sandy might be at home", thought David but she wasn't. Blair was there and she was looking for Sharon. David told her everything and wanted to help.
- If anything happens to her, said Blair, If anything happens to her, I'll kill you.
Sharon opened her eyes in the dark, smelly place. Just a little light came into the room through the window. She looked round. There were some boxes in the room. She tried to find the exit door. There was no exit. When David came to the abandoned factory, there were no police. He would behave nothing had happened. They had such plans. The police team arrived and began to wait. David would be removed out the criminals and they would be caught.
- I hope Sharon is fine. Can we trust to David? said Blair.
- We must trust. We have no other choice.
...... and sounds were heard. When the door opened they were there. Police began to catch them. Some of them tried to escape. Blair caught to Sandy and asked,
- Where is Sharon?
Sandy laughed.
They began to fight. Criminals were arrested and brought to police headquarters. Questioning began. They must have been quick. Sharon still had not found. -Where is Sharon?
-I don't know. She went for a walk?
-Where do you keep to stolen?
-We did not steal anything.
"This job will take longer." he thought. David was questioning Sandy.
-Where is Sharon?
-Why don't you ask the money?
-I don't care with money and paintings.
-Where is Sharon?
-Don't kidding me Sandy! Where is she? -"Where is she?" said Sandy. Look at that! Someone fell in love. I loved you, David. I thought you my partner. Why did you do this to me?
-I am a cop, Sandy! This is my job.
-Sharon didn't ever love you. She was just trying to catch you. I've removed her from you. You should thanks to me.
-You are a devil! Now, tell where is her?
"Oh Sharon! I hope you're well." Sharon was trying to understand what's happening.
"I was standing outside the restaurant, and ..... Oh my God! David and Sandy! Yes, yes. Certainly, David wanted me to stay there. Sandy also hit my head. They stun me and have missed. Oh my God! Blair help me....."
Suddenly voices were heard outside. A silhouette appeared in the window.
Sharon called,
-Help me. I am here!

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#1SandraRSep 2, 2009

Great chapter! \:rah\:

#2spitzmagicSep 3, 2009

OMG Mel, this is fantastic....oh goody goody goody, David is a good guy yip-pee...oh and Sharon (my fav) doesn't know it yet..Wonderful story I'm so excited can't wait for your next chapter...5.0...\:rah\:

#3omik79Sep 3, 2009

LOVELY! more please!! yay!! i hope she gets out ok!!!

#4maxi kingSep 3, 2009

\:wub\:great part!I hope the next one will be out soon,can't wait!\:wub\:

#5damnanoirSep 3, 2009

love it!!! FIVE!!!!!!

#6Jennifer_RSep 9, 2009

Oh no...she's been put in a big hole like in silence of the lambs. \:eek\:  Very good part! \:rah\:

#7fredbrennySep 20, 2009

AGGGHH...I hope she will be rescued in time!...By David....5.0!

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