Landau's Guestbook

MoriaGFeb 16, 2007

of course any suggestions on how to end or improve my story are welcome.

MoriaGFeb 16, 2007

thanks again for reading and commenting on my story. yes, carmelia is very evil. if only i could get a picture of her in handcuffs with the police

MoriaGFeb 15, 2007

Thank you for reading and commenting on my story. and just a little insight, they will get back together

MoriaGFeb 9, 2007

Just wanted to let you know i FINALLY got out my chapter 4 of For Pleasure or Worse series, please read and rate. thank you.

MoriaGDec 16, 2006

Hello again, just wanted to tell you thank you for your comments on my story. hehehe. $\:D$ i hope you did not forget to rate it.

MoriaGDec 15, 2006

oh and dont feel bad, i still forget to put up the walls or take off the plumbbob, by the way, that cheat is plumbBobtoggle, it takes off the green thing over sims head

MoriaGDec 15, 2006

I checked and your pictures are much clearer and yes your stories are getting better. Keep up the good work and Good job on the pictures. I am glad that my advice was helpful. Actually i only saw 1 (bein'g) but it did not bother me, sometimes that is just the way it uploads for some reason, dont worry, i think your spelling was okay

MoriaGDec 6, 2006

OPPS< FORGOT TO POST:Good try for your first story, if you dont mind i will give you a few hints on how to make a better story. First try to take pictures, with walls up and you might look at your camera option to get a not so fuzzy picture also. Second, when you are moving your pictures in the storybook, look at the bottom of the right hand column and you will find the icon that moves pictures up and down so that you can load and move them around, that way the story will not be backwards. And lastly, have an idea for a story first, then you can take the pictures you need to support your story and not try to write a story for a whole bunch of unrelated pictures. Hopefully, you find this helpful. I am not trying to be mean, just to help out. i was lost on my first story too. Oh right and one more thing, check the spelling of words you dont know, the people here have no tolerance for typos, hehehe GOOD LUCK!!