charlottey9p's Guestbook

maxi kingDec 22, 2008

$\:wub\:$ nice to here from you!Thank you for you lovely comment on my story!Have a lovely christmas and a great 2009! $\:wub\:$ $\:rah\:$

megansleiaJun 29, 2008

That's ok, that was a long time ago, I haven't given it another thought.

maxi kingJun 29, 2008

$\:cool\:$ You should write about things happen in school or what you do in your spare time,maybe a story how you play sims?! $\:cool\:$

EarcatJun 29, 2008

If you'd like to improve your writing, go to the library and check out William Zinsser's On Writing Well and William Strunk Jr's The Elements of Style. They're both invalauble reference books that will help you a great deal. It also helps to have an unabridged dictionary and a thesaurus. Instead of the same old tired words, think of new ones. Let your imagination soar. Take a look at your favorite books and pay attention to the way they describe things. I love Charles Dickens because he's terific at describing things, though he is awfully wordy! Writing a sim story is different than writing a traditional story, it's more like storyboarding a movie, but you'll get the hang of it. If you use custom content, it's nice to the creator credit at the end. Someone is bound to ask you where you got that dress, or wallpaper. Good luck!

maxi kingJun 29, 2008

$\:rah\:$ Thank you! I allways think about it first,then write it down and then do the pic,sometime I change a few things when I do the pics.I think your story is great for your age,don't think they have to be like storys of older writers!You must like them and other will like them,too! Have a great day!maxi $\:cool\:$

stars2moons94Jun 18, 2008

hi!!!! thanx for signing my guestbook

maxi kingJun 11, 2008

$\:cool\:$ I dont think your rude when you ask me were I'm from ! I lived for two years in England but its a long,long time ago! how did you call your story? $\:rah\:$

maxi kingMay 28, 2008

$\:rah\:$ thank you for the nice comment on my story!I'm from Germany!and not that well in english wrigting. $\:cool\:$

megansleiaFeb 21, 2008

Sorry I never hear of "The Prince and Me". I had a dream once that I married a Prince, and that is what I took the story from. $\:D$ $\:D$